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Puzzle Puzzle is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Winnie The Pooh' and post your comments here!

A work in progress, just wanted to get some feedback on the overall vibe Smile

The name obviously has nothing to do with the music.. It's just my working title for it. Big Grin



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01-11-2009 21:32 Homepage of Puzzle
Zugzwang Zugzwang is a male
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The intro pad is very nice and I like the FX stabs, builds up a very nice atmosphere. The lead is really dissonant and this bothers me personally, but if that is what you were going for then you obviously did a good job. Bigup

Drums have a lot of energy and they are quite punchy, no problems there, I like the texture of the bass. Not sure about the melody though. I liked the simplified version of the bass melody around 1:29 better than the more filled out melody.

That's just my preference though, it's not a bad track mate. Just not my style. Big Grin
02-11-2009 00:01
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Really mellow and low down vibe. Loving those delay sounds and whole windy vibe. Drop could use a sucking sound or some build up to the beat. I LOVE the key signature here. What key is this in I really like the feeling its giving me. Overall the mix could be more powerful. Is this overcompressed? Drums need saturation and punch just a tiny bit. I like the synth work. Something about this tune makes me feel dissonant like cruising down a lonely highway. Great work here.

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02-11-2009 18:57 Homepage of Dethworm
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I like the ambient sounds I'm a big fan of atmospheric drum and bass. feels like it's missing something tho kinda like it's about to turn into some heavy jungle beat. Would do as a pretty good intro.
03-11-2009 06:32
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The composition is good, but I disagree with your choice of bass. You should try and get a nice rumbling and squelching bass sample or synthesizer VST plugin.
03-11-2009 19:35
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i like the drums on this man, although i really think they could use some reverb just because they sound a little dry. love the fx as well man, and the bass. though again i reckon it could be filled out a bit (reverb) cool tune though mate.
04-11-2009 08:45
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Thanks for the feedback people Smile

@Omnis: I have no idea what key is this in, it jumps from A# minor to somewhere else all the time. Big Grin And nope, shouldn't be overcompressed.

@Clarky: Ok man, I'll throw some more reverb on it Smile

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04-11-2009 11:04 Homepage of Puzzle
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jeez, winnie the pooh with teeth and evil red eyes this is!

meaning it feels dark and twisted when the sick high synth drops in. not sure on the sub usage in the intro, kind of spoils the drop imo

defo liking it after it drops, got a vibe on its own

needs some mid bass action imo.

the drums got a weird swing on them shakers or it needs some if theres not any.

work it

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04-11-2009 18:48 Homepage of cynik
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quote:
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not sure on the sub usage in the intro, kind of spoils the drop imo

Taken into account.. I scrapped the intro subline. Smile
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the drums got a weird swing on them shakers or it needs some if theres not any.

Didn't understand what you mean. Confused
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jeez, winnie the pooh with teeth and evil red eyes this is!


Devil Phanks.

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04-11-2009 19:43 Homepage of Puzzle
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the drums got a weird swing on them shakers or it needs some if theres not any.
Didn't understand what you mean. Confused


the ghost hits and shakers that go in your break feel not connected, as if there is a cut on them, I would try increasing decay or in combination with fiddling with attack. also, Id try to "humanize" the beat more, add swing on the hits or on some of the hits to keep the individual bits of the beat glue more and feel like its one solid beat. maybe chuck in a new break in it

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04-11-2009 22:39 Homepage of cynik
Puzzle Puzzle is a male
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quote:
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the ghost hits and shakers that go in your break feel not connected, as if there is a cut on them


Ah ok, thanks for the feedback Wink

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05-11-2009 14:28 Homepage of Puzzle
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You know what i think of this dude Big Grin

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