 drw89 - Nemesis |
drw89 
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Registration Date: 26-01-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Nemesis' and post your comments here!
Little track i'm working on, somewhat harder, 180 bpm Neuro or whatever. All synth sounds made with Sylenth-1.
No mastering yet, again, crap speakers!
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25-10-2009 21:48 |
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SICKorWELL
SICKorWELL DnB
Registration Date: 24-09-2009
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not much to say mabey try switching some breaks up here and there its got a good tech feel. kicks become lost in drop bring them out a bit more for this style tune they should realy have some power . put more time in this one sounds good keep it up
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25-10-2009 23:24 |
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Zugzwang
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Registration Date: 13-05-2009
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You're off to a great start mate, I'd say the best way you could improve the track would be to get ahold of some better gear besides crap speakers and work on EQing/mixing. You have good ideas and a good grasp on structure, you just need to improve your sound!
Drums could use a bit more punch and the synths around the drums could use a little bit shaved off of them to give everything a bit more room.
Really loving what you've got so far though mate!
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26-10-2009 09:08 |
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Anarky
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Registration Date: 02-08-2009
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yes mate.defintly soundin like a good start-like the kik/snare wen it drops-wud tighten up the q on the low end of the eq of the kik(if u kno wot i mean?!)kik sounds fat in intro but losses power in main tune.rekon u cud do wiv a shorter intro-jus my preference.ye this sounds mental wen it drops-phat-jus need more heavier sub n i rekon more mids 2 make it more in ur face.rekon jus crispen n boost everyfin n even re-mix every channel down to get the most power out each sound.get it finished!
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26-10-2009 22:41 |
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Gerrit
Kai
Registration Date: 16-05-2008
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(This review is written while keeping in mind that the tune does need some serious mastering).
Re-wiiiind!
First of all, I wanna say i love this track, and I'm glad to be able to review this knowing this is only a preview.
The intro might be a bit long for my taste, as it takes away quite a lot of space for the harder hitting stuff.
At around 01:02 you got the break in the beats, I would just do the drum loop once or twice, but leave it away just before the 'semi-drop'.
The drop on itsself is ace, just as it should be, and so is everything after it.
As I told you, it could be a bit longer, but nonetheless, I'm looking forward to the final release!
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27-10-2009 22:22 |
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analysiss
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Registration Date: 02-10-2009
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mate this sounds wicked just waiting for drop, wicked intro, yeah wicked synths man have a nice effect to the atmos,real good atmos,feeling the beat nice and punchy basslines sick this is gonna be a massive tune love the vocal sample by the way [one of the best tunes on the site]maybe bring the high end down a touch on the hats levelwise peace
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30-10-2009 20:07 |
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dark genius
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Registration Date: 04-11-2009
Posts: 27
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the drop at 1.30 is pure savageousness! The track was steady until then but then it just kicks off big time! I'm gonna have to up my game to release my music on this site! I'm guessing that its a work in progress but it sounds like the finished article to me. drums are tight compressed well, the drums are well varied throughout. 0.44 the kick come in hard. I like this track once it really gets going 1.30
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