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25-10-2009 12:26 |
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BattleDrone
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The bass lacks power. The ghost snares are a tad too loud. It's not bad, but it kinda lacks identity.
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25-10-2009 13:48 |
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SICKorWELL
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bring the cymbels up it needs a good ride in the intro. kinda has that early dj crush feel sounds good just needs brightness on the high end bass sounds and melody are nice drums could use some more to them at points to give the tune some flair. i like it though just give it a bit more drums to realy open the tune up drum breaks to it need some breaks ! here and there quick fills .
good tune overall i like it
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25-10-2009 23:29 |
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
The bass lacks power. The ghost snares are a tad too loud. It's not bad, but it kinda lacks identity. |
I fixed the bass since. Realised that I left in <40Hz which was crushing everything. The ghost snares are just how I want them... but thanks for the input. It lacks identity - you're right.. I really need a hook, as the lead is barely there, and it's boring as it follows the bass. Tonight I intend on working on a new lead.
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26-10-2009 08:52 |
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Originally posted by SICKorWELL
bring the cymbels up it needs a good ride in the intro. kinda has that early dj crush feel sounds good just needs brightness on the high end bass sounds and melody are nice drums could use some more to them at points to give the tune some flair. i like it though just give it a bit more drums to realy open the tune up drum breaks to it need some breaks ! here and there quick fills .
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Thanks! Yes, I hadn't even really started on the intro yet... Wasn't sure which was I should go with it. I've added some varied rides into the intro and it sounds sweet! 
Brightness in the high end bass-sounds.. I can hear what you mean, and I'm glad you mentioned it, because I would have missed it. I've been producing with headphones...
Definitely needs variations in the drums, and that's something else that I'll be working on tonight.
Really appreciate your comments, thank you.
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26-10-2009 08:54 |
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drw89
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Nice intro string, could use some more low. Awesome rolling drums. This is quite different shit, i like it! The sub could use a bit of mid, not much, but so that it doesnt only humm. It does get a bit repetitive after 03:00 tbh. You sould work more on variation cuz the sounds are awesome!
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26-10-2009 14:30 |
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26-10-2009 22:13 |
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cydore
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Its pretty decent the electric guitar type synth reminds me of prodigy. Pretty nice but could do with a more intense drop. That random beep is a bit annoying
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03-11-2009 06:52 |
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Vly
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I dont really like the intro,i mean the pad just isnt panned enough and its kinda boring,dunno why it seems that way.if u bring it infront a little and get it panned its gonna be a lot better.The drums are sounding sweet,nothing bad to say about them.The bassline is ok but it gets boring after a while.the fx u used for fills are kool and fit the track.it could be an interesting track to listen to but it needs more variaton.
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08-11-2009 00:43 |
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Azlateen
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Dude this track is sweet! Love the bass and lead, and that snare groove is amazing. Huge phat ass beat in the beginning is a great build up to everything else. Although maybe a slighter louder and steadier high hat to add in would help things groove a little more. Great synth pads too. Everything built up nicely, and everything ended nicely too. This gonna be released anywhere anytime soon?
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