 TTT31 - Ttt31 Flstudio Started |
TTT31
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Registration Date: 24-08-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Ttt31 Flstudio Started' and post your comments here!
it is my first experiment with FL stuio it is some intropducing to my song i wanna ask you about my continuance.... if i should work on it farther or it is totaly shit :-DDD write review friends thanks a lot
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12-10-2009 15:03 |
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Gregg 
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Ok this may have sounded interesting but your use of eq or choice of really bad samples ruined it. There are almost no high mids and highs which make the whole tune sounding muffled. take off all your processing and rework every sound so that you will end up having a more balanced frequency spectrum.
Drum programming with just a single hat is too simple layer a break or something. The snare sound isn’t really my thing either.
Lower the amount of compression you have on your master.
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13-10-2009 12:56 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Instruments sound weird, bass has to much hi-end, snare sounds muffled. Try to sound just like a normal dnb tune for now. Finding you own style is an issue for later.
There's hope, but you're not there yet, there's a loooooot of work to be done
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13-10-2009 23:10 |
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Zugzwang
Doin' it for the love
Registration Date: 13-05-2009
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I like the intro FX, and you have a fairly good grasp on buildup. I could tell a drop was coming and that's always a good thing. No complaints in that department. Very nice ideas for the whole tune, you just need to work on improving your sound. Having a quick look around the forums will help you find techniques on how to make your drums more punchy, adding a breakbeat behind your main drums will definitely help the sound. You want your drums to sound a lot more natural, and breaks help that.
Keep up the good work mate!
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15-10-2009 05:20 |
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analysiss
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Registration Date: 02-10-2009
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good idea can see what ur trying to achieve i love this style of dnb defo keep working on this,well impressed as this is your first attempt its certainly not totally shit-i would say the beat sounds a bit flat with respect to the snare and also sounds abit muddy on the whole [nothing abit of eqing wont sort out]also try some automation and add at least another break into the mix and maybe another synth line,hope this helps peace- keep em coming
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17-10-2009 23:26 |
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cydore
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Registration Date: 06-04-2009
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Not too bad sounds like someone's breathing deeply to the beat which sounds kinda cool. Those drums definatly need more work. The snares a bit chirpy and whats with the long pause lol?
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03-11-2009 07:00 |
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Vly
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Registration Date: 22-10-2009
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Everything sounds really compressed.Tho u had an interesting idea,still your quality is far from good.Anyway the composition is fair,nice intro and buildup.
But if thats really ur first attempt,good job.If you develop it more and get the sound u want its gona be decent.
keep it up mate 
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05-11-2009 00:04 |
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