drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Z Day - Human Error Z Day - Human Error Author Post Z Day I <3 DNB Registration Date: 21-05-2009 Posts: 43 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Human Error' and post your comments here! A little something I'm working on. Unfinished, I just need some criticism before I continue. __ Proudly the .BE's FOURTH youngest member (behind puzzle, age break & jeffijoe) 11-10-2009 08:18 rez Wicked Producer Registration Date: 15-04-2008 Posts: 333 Helpfulness rating:  intro sounds pretty vivid, good elements there... didn't expect the track to turn the way it did after the drop, but i like it cool trancy bassline and synths, overall a pretty accomplished beginning with a nice vibe. mix sounds pretty clear too... keep working on this! nice job man... __ o_O 11-10-2009 23:16 TTT31 Producer Registration Date: 24-08-2009 Posts: 77 Helpfulness rating:  it is style which i love :-) very nice . i cant give into my track so big speed :-( i dont now how to do it :-) you work with which program??? 12-10-2009 15:11 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Intro holds a lot of mystery (good). The wobblish sound in the intro sounds too dry. Main drop is weird and doesn't fit the intro imo. Not feeling the drums, especially the snare. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 12-10-2009 16:48 SDK Newbie Registration Date: 27-09-2009 Posts: 3 intro has a nice creepy sound to it, leveling is all good... nice vox... hal9000 INSANE drop... This whole song is creepy and intense in a good way. The bass at 1:49 might come down a little bit. I cant wait to here the finished version 12-10-2009 22:14 Anarky myspace.com/ anarkyproductions Registration Date: 02-08-2009 Posts: 135 Helpfulness rating:  safe mate.starters nice intro-rekon u cud mayb use another sorta pad or summin 2 glu it all a bit better-fat drop.wo man this sounds hevvy!very original soundin-like how u workin the basses 2geva but not feelin the switch at about 1.16 a bit too cheesy i rekon 4 this trak-stik wiv the 1st basses patterns an do more automation-fink then u got a hevvy dancefloor track!get it finished mate n jus in my opinion make it a bit darker n it will b killer trak! __ 13-10-2009 21:40 Zugzwang Doin' it for the love Registration Date: 13-05-2009 Posts: 206 Helpfulness rating:  The intro sounds really professional, the drop doesn't have as much impact as I think it could. Maybe a crash cymbal or an FX kick could help deliver the drop. Also the kick roll before "Good bye" is really soft and doesn't help the tension when its that quiet. The snare sounds bare, I think making it punchier would help. But I really like the bass sounds and FX, really dark vibes on this track and I'm loving it a lot. Keep improving it and post up the final version when you get it done! 15-10-2009 05:06 Dethworm Cymatics Registration Date: 11-01-2009 Posts: 332 Helpfulness rating:  Hahahahaha I used that vocal samples years ago in my tune. Its a bit played out and HEAVILY copywrited. There are better ones out there. Snare sounds really poppy and bad. Cool little spy noise. Drums need a more human feel. You are really on your way though and ovbiously have skill so keep working man and it will come to you! EQ isnt bad either! __ www.soundcloud.com/riveraccorsi 15-10-2009 16:54 analysiss Producer Registration Date: 02-10-2009 Posts: 90 Helpfulness rating:  At last a proper dnb tune this is wicked mate real pro sounding loving the techy side of things at the moment make sure you get this finished as this is easily the best tune on this site that ive come across,wicked keep up the cool sounds bro 19-10-2009 16:31 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Z Day - Human Error