 TEST - True Wobla |
TEST 
Producer
Registration Date: 25-09-2007
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Please check out my new track 'True Wobla' and post your comments here!
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09-10-2009 20:58 |
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goonybag
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Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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only listening through laptop speakers, but ill give it a go!
snare sounds a little dominant, and high in the freq range would definately ditch it and replace with something with more mids. also the drums need to change up a bit more, snare gets to repetitive. would like to see some dramatic build ups as well before that wobble drops.
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11-10-2009 04:55 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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The drum patterns are alright, they still can use a layer to fill in some of the empty spaces, maybe turn the cymbal down a tad and add some different filtered breaks till you find one that works with ya wobbles. The drumz patterns do so far go well with the baseline. Like the wobble, but it sounds like you can still do a lot more to it, add a high layer to each sound/pattern to make it sharper and make some subtle changes to each layer keep it exciting, you could add some slight distortion or filtering to accomplish that. The human ear loves slight imperfections. I like what you got going so far brutha, keep it. Cheers.
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11-10-2009 07:24 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Needs a kick which is equally smashy as the snare.
In fact the snare is way too smashy. Tune isn't going anywhere after a while. Just wobble bass is not enough to keep it entertaining I'm afraid.
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12-10-2009 16:51 |
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Anarky
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Registration Date: 02-08-2009
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safe mate.nice jungly feel 2 the intro i rekon.ye man this is soundin phat!fink both ur kik n snare cud both have a bit more punch/crunch n rekon u cud crispen up ur b-line aswell.ye defintly need 2 get sum more edits on ur bassline-melody,automation etc etc.add sum more elements 2 makwe it bit more interestin thruout.keep workin on this 1 mate-agen got potential
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13-10-2009 21:53 |
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Zugzwang
Doin' it for the love
Registration Date: 13-05-2009
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Snare is incredibly dominant, I would turn down the volume on that and make the kick punchier to stand out better. The structure all kind of blurs together, I think this could be improved tremendously to help make this track really smash. I like the wobble bassline quite a bit. The synth around 1:30 isn't in the same key as the bassline.
Add some more variation and I think you've got a quality tune. Enjoyed listening to it mate, keep at it.
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15-10-2009 05:14 |
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Galvatron
Tourist
Registration Date: 19-10-2009
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This track has potential. The beat is creatively made and convincing, but the rest of it needs a lot of work.
You could start by giving the bass a better filter effect and maybe a little distortion. Right now, it sounds very naked and too simple.
Get/create vocal samples and atmospheric sounds.
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07-11-2009 19:48 |
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