Has some serious potential. Snare isnt my thing and doesnt really fit too well with the other sounds. The bass sound also is a little flat and sounds like a triangle wave. Get some more depth to it with some more movement and variation. I can tell that this is just a drum loop playing over and over again with just some ideas slapped on top! A truly good tune takes MONTHS to complete. This one has some way to go! Also that bell type FM synth sound is also a bit grating on the ears and too loud in the mix.
needs an intro for sure, the start sounds like it would be a big impact drop if built up correctly. BIG sound, everything punches through well. get some distorted mid range growls in there to really push it along, the bell type sound I feel does the track no justice, drop the drums in and out a bit as well as changing them up with some breaks would help keep the listener interested. More fx as well would help. good start for sure, only one nights work, so heaps of potential once you work it over a few times. big ups, feeling the potential for sure
The bass is nice and I like the drumz, maybe add less reverb on the snare and give the mixdown a litle less reverb and more eq on seperating to make it clearer. very nice tune brutha. Cheers.
