Dj-Lowprofile - Work It Out - Prewiew

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Dj-Lowprofile - Work It Out - Prewiew

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Dj-Lowprofile Dj-Lowprofile is a male

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Registration Date: 25-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Work It Out - Prewiew' and post your comments here!

preview of a tune im working on

04-10-2009 06:36

Nick ZZ Nick ZZ is a male

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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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like dem drumz. The pads are alright. Like the main synth. Like some of the different variations/samples in there. Good tune brutha. Cheers.

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04-10-2009 14:21

SICKorWELL
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Registration Date: 24-09-2009
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AHHHHH RUDE BOI!!!!! nice im a huge jungle fan i wrote jungel for years loven it. bring theedit break up a bit . id take that mid bass down a nut hair and add a lil sound over sub like some lo range sound not sub just a sound over sub like a lo tone .. and on the break around 2 3 mins needs some kicks bilding to the break. take drums down abit on main drop just a lil to bright and has no sub drop or big hit on main drop needs to be huge son . and take the pads down a bit in intro to give some room inthe tune

id would take all lo range off the congas and boost them a lil .. im loving this tune just needs alot of work mate

check out this ragga tune its called jahs warning . heres the link feed back on that shit son.

http://soundcloud.com/sickorwell/sickorwell-jahs-warning

get at me id like to hear more of this tune as it comes along

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by SICKorWELL: 05-10-2009 01:27.

05-10-2009 01:25

goonybag goonybag is a male

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drums have been chopped up nicely, vox stabs are cool, not a big fan of the keys in there, they sound out of place, a little "stuck" to me. like the bass line once the layered sine comes in and more once the beats a re double time, the vox samples are the highlight for me on this tune as well as the drum edits, overall a very clean sounding track. Is there a period of silence around 3"33? or something wrong with the way its streaming?

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05-10-2009 11:48

BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male

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There are too many vocals in this tune, it sounds like a sequence of vocals rather than a tune because it could do with a better main loop.
It starts off as really nervous DnB (gimme more) and then turns into dubstep-ish wobble stuff. The compbination is a bit weird. Try to stick to one style if possible.

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05-10-2009 19:42

Azlateen Azlateen is a male

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Registration Date: 18-06-2009
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Not a half bad track overall. It's a little random, and it's hard to find an overall theme throughout the track. The drums are really random, and steady time would definitely help the track move along nicely. Maybe if you took the loop at 1:04 and used a smidgen more, it would definitely help give the tune a steady feel. The changing of the drums every measure is a little tough on the ears, and it's hard to find that steady theme. Though the breakdown at 1:25 was nice. It had it's own steady theme, which was why it was probably the best part of the song. All I can suggest is keep a steady time with the drums, though a progressive rhythm over the course of 4 measure always works. Great bassline though, the changing of the bassline was pretty good though.

20-10-2009 05:29

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