drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » den_bert - Mind Outburst den_bert - Mind Outburst Author Post den_bert unregistered Please check out my new track 'Mind Outburst' and post your comments here! I've been on this forum for over a year, im not really a poster, more of a reader . But anyway this is my first tune I post here, so dont be to harsh om me . Its still work in progress (outro missing, etc..) Any tips are appreciated gz 03-10-2009 12:20 Nick ZZ Master Producer Registration Date: 29-05-2005 Posts: 960 Helpfulness rating:  Very pop-ish. Like some of the wobble synths. Tune could use a few more drum edits or changes. Most of the tune is predictable. Cheers. __ Nick & Erina Z http://www.beatbiz.net/artist.php?USERID=493 03-10-2009 12:34 brucifer Making all the tunes your mum loves Registration Date: 23-10-2007 Posts: 997 Helpfulness rating:  Hello mate. Thanks for the review Actually like this intro. That sub nice. Some reason, probably my end, the stream isn't working properly, but I will carry on trying to review. Right then, I think you need to bring you drums forward. Possibly compress them to give them that bit of power. I like the way you have layered the sub and wobble. They work nicely The melody is alright, but not to my flavour really. Nice ideas though __ 05-10-2009 10:04 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  ez there matey nice commercial sound here everything is fairly well balanced, maybe bring out sum lower frequencies in the snare for a bit more punch good stuff overall man, keep em comin! __ 05-10-2009 12:43 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  I wouldn't apply the same filter on the drums and the bass in the intro, it loses a bit of power that way. The vocal is too loud and could use some processing to make it more interesting (take out the lows for starters). The stereo image: the whole thing sounds like it has maximum stereo separation going on. It sounds as if my speakers are extremely far apart. Bass and lead sound ok, melodies could be a bit more uproaring for my taste. BUT: for a first tune you did a hell of a job. Welcome on board! __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 05-10-2009 19:32 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » den_bert - Mind Outburst