Please check out my new track 'Longing' and post your comments here!
My dnb muse is gone! Since the last upload on here, I couldn't even make it to a half acceptable concept.
“Longing” was supposed to be some 90 BPM whatever and I forced it to sound like dnb. Not sure where to take it or if it’s worth to continue in this direction. Help me out please!
The only negative remark would be the sound after a snare (sounds like a long echo or it could be a ride) which makes the drums less rolling.
This stuff has high potential.
Keep at it!
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likin the intro strate away,wiked atmos,subs lush,everyfin soundin sweet.yes mate! fat drumz wen it drops synths soundin sweet,defo wud wana hear longer/fuller version.by the way mate aswell i REALLY like that intro n the whole idea!
hi gregg
love the epic emotional vibe right from the get go. sounding pretty darn sweet considering its unmastered.
in my opinion ur certainly going down the right track, i can't think of any real critique apart from to keep on with this, lay it out into a full tune add a few more elements that u feel will build on what u already have (maybe just get it more intense and focus more on some raw / gritty sounds for a drop)
can't wait for the finished version, make sure u get it finished!
Sick atmoz, sick master, sick sounds
snare could use little more snappy i think x
melodies fit well, very massive bass; reminds me of teebee somehow haha im a fan man
I like the synth samples and the pad at the beginning and throughout. Not too sure about the drums and bass during the pad before the drop. Also, the drop seems to come out of nowhere. There's no build-up or tension. The listener isn't gagging for the drop. I like the lead sound you use for the drop, nice and crisp. What I think you need is to get rid of the pad noises when the drop comes so that there is a switch in mood - these sounds can still come back in later, but it gives a nice contrast to what has come before if you switch for the drop. Kick and snare seem a bit too loud in the mix. Also, sub and mid-bass need to be more apparent as well. Maybe in the gap between the lead samples you could have some kind of other dynamic - like a vocal sample or something grittier. I don't know mate, just my knee-jerk reaction. Good luck!
sounds nice mate. only bit that is annoying me is the hit on the snare, it has a horribly long tail on it, or you might be doubling it up with a crash??
the shortness of this clip makes me want to hear more of it
(played it 5 times now).
like everyone else has stated something up with the tail of the snare.
love the intro with the military snare roll real nice m8.
more pls
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