djsensa2004 - Your Heaven |
Sensa
Wicked Producer
 
Registration Date: 14-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Your Heaven' and post your comments here!!!
edit by thechronic: all tracks by djsensa are removed because of repeated use of copyrighted samples
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13-04-2004 14:21 |
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Vocal is cool, but the silence between the parts should be somehow filled up.
Love that tramen loop (used it a few times too
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Sounds are nice.
Isn't this singing already used somewhere???
Bassline is good, but way too loud, it completely overpowers the tramen, taking away all the power from the track. Pity.
Weird use of the swingbeat, not sure if that's a positive or negative thing.
2.5/5
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14-04-2004 11:38 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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I can definitely recognise your style
The sound is very much different though.
Vocals in the beginning are weirdly cut, sound very choppy, probably some trouble with noisy source material
The delay on it makes it worse, since the chops are also repeated, making them more apparent. This also happens to the singing in the track.
The singing is strange but fits the song, seems inspired on some 80s bands like Ultravox
The snare could use some more power again, in dnb it is common to have deep snares. A good trick is trying to compress the kick and snare together with short attack and release times, so they are at the same level all the time. The snare also seems to be a bit off-centre, to the right, don't know if that is done on purpose? Maybe it's better to move the hihats out of the centre and put the snare dead centre.
The snare also needs some EQ to make it punch through the mix, it sounds a bit flat.
The kick has too much low end (I think
can't hear it on my headphones) and is not really defined. Try a different kick sample or layer it with another sample.
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