 Scaranja - Hold Again |
tryptech 
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Please check out my new track 'Hold Again' and post your comments here!
Enjoy
Dont know sure bout the vocal
its doesnt fit perfect, its alittle off i think
but cant get it fixed
enjoy
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16-09-2009 22:44 |
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hatmanafro
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i think that the vocal is too loud compared to everything else.. maybe a lil more EQ needs to be done on the vocal, its sounds lil muddy so u might wanna cut the low frequiencies and up the highs a lil bit. the melodies are hella nice.. its chill. but with a touch of attitude.. vert nice i like the beat that came in at 1:40.. that is nice with everything working together.. i think now all that is left is the mastering and sum lil EQ.. just to give it that pro sound.. good job man
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16-09-2009 23:31 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Hi mate. Thanks for the review you did 
Vocals sound a bit loud and have a bit to much mid.
I can hear some ducking going on, like someone else mentioned. I get the same problem when I used the sidechaining in Reason. I find that sometimes you are better of just sidechaining out the relevant frequencies instead of the whole bass or synth sound.
Some real nice melodies here. Nice little progressions going on. You are maybe over doing the filters on some of it though.
Enjoyed it
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17-09-2009 09:29 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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If it stays off you could use Antares autotune to fix it or use it for vocoding and play the correct note on the synth you modulate with it.
Tune is nice but the vocal is too loud at times and the vocal needs to be more at the same level so compression could help.
Some filtering manipulations (sweeping bandpasses) sound unpleasant to the ears. You seem to boost some very present frequencies which causes a temporary boost. A limiter could avoid this.
Drums should be louder.
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17-09-2009 11:33 |
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demure
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really liked the tune, musically some great ideas man, however again the processing is a little off, once you get that right i think you will be sorted because clearly you have good musical understanding and the tune really wants to come through think the energy has been killed a bit with compression here though. i would mess with the attack and release settings to find somethin that works better with the track. great tune though keep tweakin till its done man
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17-09-2009 12:46 |
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Anarky
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safe scaranja,ye kno wot u mean bout the vocal,jus dunt sound rite 2 me.likin ur drumz,specially kik-snare!jus fink u cud add a touch more sharpness to ur hi-end drumz maybe?!nice sub.overall not my kinda tune mate but fink all ur synths and sounds work very well together,jus sort that vocal n i fink u got a nice commercial trak on ur hands!
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18-09-2009 04:09 |
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Nick ZZ
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19-09-2009 12:24 |
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Spectral Pace
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Contextually very good. I like the beat and the main lead sample. You've have made it interesting with lots of hfo effects and drum fills. The only thing I would say is that you've applied the filters to the whole audio output which seems fairly basic from the listeners point of view. Perhaps maybe just do it to the vocal sample, kick and snare. Also it's pretty much the same thing over and over 'here I go all over'. I know you have a bit of contrast after she finishes singing, but I think you need to spice up the main beat as well and maybe have a dirtier mid/lead section when the main vocal sample is playing. Much better than what I'm producing at the moment though. Good job.
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19-09-2009 22:26 |
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