 Anarky - Space Lines-update |
Anarky 
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Registration Date: 02-08-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Space Lines-update' and post your comments here!
safe,think i have improved this quite bit from last version-tryed to take the advice i was given n have worked fairly hard to get the drumz the way they r now-was a pain in the ass cus my b-line is hittin sum freqeuncies same as drumz so re-eqd a few things n am personally quit happy with the changes iv made.newayz as always feedbak n critisiscm all welcome.cheers!
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14-09-2009 18:29 |
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hatmanafro
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Registration Date: 12-09-2009
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i like that sorta dark spacy intro, that snare drum is really nice for this style.. its pretty catchy.. i could see this in a badass dnb mix.. i like the arrangement of the little kickdrum at like 2:24 on.. that lil variation..very nice.. well with the headphones on.. that snare hits a lil too hard..
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16-09-2009 00:45 |
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tryptech
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Hi anarky
rating is too low i think, gonna crank that up.
Beats are nice, bass doenst do it for me,
i think you need some atmlos here, and maybe some more catchy bassline, it hasnt got that wow factor.
some edits like the double kicks are too simple, cuz your kick sounds very old scool 808 ish, which can be good but jump up has is all for the bass, so just keep the click of the kick, and get that bass more upfront.
If youre on fruity, I maybe can help you on the mixdown, but I m not so good at it
greetz
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16-09-2009 14:18 |
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Anarky
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safe 4 savin my ratin boyz! n bad luk 2 the fukin pussy who keeps anomonasly ratin my traks 1/2 stars!ha!if i find out who u r an ur in weston i WILL fukin smash u!
ye i defintly kno wot u mean scaranja bout not havin the wow factor,with the kik i was experimentin on this 1 by havin 1 hi-kik hittin just over 100hz n a low 1 hittin jus under 100hz,an wiv the b-lines im fukd b cus they ar all bounced into mono channels n like a twat i 4got 2 save the presets!newayz once agen cheers 4 comments n votes n this tune is alreddy sakd off n workin on much better jump-up track at mo!
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16-09-2009 18:40 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Nice intro mate.
I think you would benefit with a sharper snare. Also add some ghosts to help the beats roll a bit better.
I must say mate. This is a vast improvement on your other track mate. Sound real good. Some nice ideas and sounds. Sounds late 90's style. Actually reminds me of Jonny L for some reason. Just sort those drums out.
Also notice your writing has improved also mate. Lot easier understanding you comments 
I would give you some extra marks for that as well, but I can't find a Literature section in the review section...
Well done mate. Enjoyed
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17-09-2009 09:40 |
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Anarky
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haha!cheers mate.really appreciate ur comments!
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18-09-2009 03:56 |
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Nick ZZ
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Like the fx in the intro, very interesting. The drop is alright. Drumz are good. Like the different changes. Maybe a few more synth edits and variations will make the tune better. Cheers.
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Nick & Erina Z
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