 hatmanafro - Daddy Was A Thug |
hatmanafro 
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Registration Date: 12-09-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Daddy Was A Thug' and post your comments here!
i tried to go for sumthing chill but i can never make it happen.. i tried to MC or rap on it.. kind of embarrasing but i like how it turned out
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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14-09-2009 00:40 |
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tryptech
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Man gotta like that full sound, just little too much revverb
but your sound has potential, it just needs polishing.
Do you use fruity?
MC is goodd man
Just little too much hig in the mix, but the track has good sounds, like the arpegio like thing around 3.25
nicee
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ANALOGUE (Tryptech)
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16-09-2009 14:21 |
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hatmanafro
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Registration Date: 12-09-2009
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Originally posted by Scaranja
Man gotta like that full sound, just little too much revverb
but your sound has potential, it just needs polishing.
Do you use fruity?
MC is goodd man
Just little too much hig in the mix, but the track has good sounds, like the arpegio like thing around 3.25
nicee
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yeah man i use fruity loops... thank you bro, ok.. yeah i totally use reveerb alot..
the apegio was actually my least favorite part of the song.. lol.. but im glad you like it bro
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16-09-2009 23:22 |
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Gregg
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Registration Date: 16-05-2007
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Like the sound of your pad, mellow and smooth. It seems to clip tho, see if you can fix that.
The vocal is processed too much and totally drowned in reverb/delay. You could automate those effects (first reduce their amount of course) and use em only in parts to underline certain passages.
After you brought down the overall amount of reverb in your mix it should already sound less wet and more clean. It’s ok if you want elements to fuse together, but you have to find the balance between clarity (frequency separation) and wetness. Reverb applied for instance to only one element is more effective than applying it to 5 or 6 as the contrast between dry and wet will underline the actual presence. So yeah, it’s about the right balance.
Your drum hits are well chosen, kick and snare are generally punchy. But they need a bit of polishing (compression/eq). No Reverb on the kick, and only a small amount on the snare and hats (use a plugin which has a low cut inbuilt, you don’t want no reverb on bass either).
The kick is not really cutting through the sub bass, eq it, or use side chaining via the mixer (if you have a new version of FL) or via the peak controller.
I’d like to hear a clearer & cleaner version of this, so keep working.
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17-09-2009 21:46 |
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