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alternate force 
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Please check out my new track 'I Know U Want Me' and post your comments here!
made on reason 4 !!
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11-09-2009 16:58 |
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thechronic
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Relaxed stuff, and very warm sounding. It almost sounds analog 
The kick drum has a strange tonality, it has one frequency sticking out, almost like it is singing. It's bothering me a bit. Maybe pitch it down slightly? Snare sounds fine. Hats are just a touch too soft, fix it by pulling up the top end using EQ, rather than pushing up the fader.
The drums are becoming repetitive after a few listens. You also use patterns which are typical of more up tempo tracks, maybe get some more breakbeat style patterns going.
The sub is loud on my big speakers, but fine on my small ones.
Some work needed on the structure but I'm sure you are aware of that. The track does not really have a start or ending.
The vocal sample is a bit cheesy even though it fits the track well. I think it would work better if you use it sparingly.
The electric piano chords and tingly sounds are very nice, sound effects too. Stereo image and mixdown are very good.
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12-09-2009 10:41 |
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alternate force
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THANKS CHRONIC 4 GIVING ME AN HONEST AND DETAILED REVIEW 
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12-09-2009 13:50 |
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hatmanafro
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really really chilled.. i loved it
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12-09-2009 23:03 |
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Tomos
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Loving the chill vibes here mate. Really, really like that jazzy rhode and snare sound.
I would agree with most of Chron's comments. However, the sub on my headphones sounds fine. At some points, it actually sounds a bit quiet.
You need to think about using that vocal a bit more sparingly. Like Chron said, it's a bit cheesy and repetitive. Even if you just ocassionally put it through some different effects, that would help to mix it up a bit more.
Nice start tho mate. 
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13-09-2009 10:28 |
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alternate force
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Originally posted by Tomos
Loving the chill vibes here mate. Really, really like that jazzy rhode and snare sound.
I would agree with most of Chron's comments. However, the sub on my headphones sounds fine. At some points, it actually sounds a bit quiet.
You need to think about using that vocal a bit more sparingly. Like Chron said, it's a bit cheesy and repetitive. Even if you just ocassionally put it through some different effects, that would help to mix it up a bit more.
Nice start tho mate.
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nice 1 tomos ... yea it needs alot work .. think i might change the vocal and ill do the things the chron said
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13-09-2009 14:11 |
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tryptech
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Hi nice acoustic sound
vocal is a little overused
the pads and piano melodies are nice
very alix perez stylish
clean sound
greetz man
keep up the good productions
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16-09-2009 14:38 |
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veto
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23-09-2009 20:47 |
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demure
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work the snare, too lazy |
work the review, too lazy
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23-09-2009 20:53 |
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alternate force
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Originally posted by demure
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Originally posted by veto
work the snare, too lazy |
work the review, too lazy |
he he ... thanks demure !!!
and i did work the snare ... but needs some more work .. other than the work i did .. thats what this site is 4 !!!
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23-09-2009 22:54 |
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Nick ZZ
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