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BattleDrone
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Sounds very rock oriented, especially the long bass notes. This isn't dancefloor material in its current form.
I would like it if you would make the bass a bit more "alive" by adding some filtering action.
The tune in it's current form tends to be somewhat repetitive.
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09-09-2009 14:52 |
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Alebrijez
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10-09-2009 07:36 |
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wrm
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Nice intro. Nice full beat. Bass could be boosted in the lows and a bit louder. Liking it so far. Interesting stuff. Keep it up!
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10-09-2009 11:32 |
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m-ej
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sounds really nice this end, love the hi synth, intro pads are slick too.
nice man
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10-09-2009 15:14 |
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like the synth sounds pretty fresh, drums are nice too, intro builds tension well. maybe add some spacey effects with delay on em (just personal taste) i'd make the hats a little crisper so they stand out from the splashy high end. maybe get an automated notch filter on that bassline too to add some more movement, nice start though mate keep it going
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10-09-2009 19:09 |
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cynik
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10-09-2009 20:12 |
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Anarky
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safe mate.red ova reveiws b4 lisenin 2 this 1,nuffin constructiv i can add really,defo agree about ur bassline n fink it got potential 2 b much better,like ovas sed sum more automation on filters/lfos/oscillators n it cud really b rockin-not that it bad now jus fink cud b better!ye man-beats are nice-luvvin ur little kik/snare roll jus b4 drop.fink its pretty cool how the beat kinda progreses after the drop,wunt sure wot 2 make of it on 1st listen but ye fink it works well how it sorta piks up the pace n the lively hats n that all work 2geva sweet i rekon.overall not the kind of d&b i listen to but fair play 4 production-everyfin sounds as it shud 2 me
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10-09-2009 21:11 |
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Zugzwang
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Thank you guys so much for the input!
It's very helpful, it's given me a lot of insight into the state of the track and how it can be improved and I'm already working on finishing it!
And yes indeed, I am using Addictive Drums. This whole song started out as me just playing around with what Addictive Drums can do, infact the project file is named ADTest.flp
VERY powerful, dynamic plug-in that I would recommend to anyone.
Anyways, thanks, fuck yeah you guys rock!
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11-09-2009 06:19 |
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hatmanafro
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the bass sounds too loud. or like too much mid in it, teh drums are pretty nice, i dont perticularly like the melodie or the whole style. but i think you executed it pretty nicely, the whole progression could have been better. but overall, nice tune
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12-09-2009 23:50 |
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Tomos
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Wow, this is brilliant. The bassline definitely reminds me of Dead Prez's tune Hip Hop. Can't really say anything that hasn't already been said. Just wanted to let you know that I'm loving this.
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13-09-2009 10:35 |
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tryptech
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Intro im not intoo
but when that main synth kicks, its hot, sound like fokking concord dawn, and that half tempo thing is hot like hell
love the sounds and melodies
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16-09-2009 14:41 |
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brucifer
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Wow, it does sound like some sort of metal track.
Nice melodies in the intro. No complaints.
Maybe bring the drums a bit more forward.
Very nice
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17-09-2009 09:44 |
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Nick ZZ
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Pad in intro is alright. Like the pree-drop intro, drumz are nice, maybe work on the 1:05 to 1:12 part and add some tension before adding the DnB spead up drumz. Hope this helps ya. Cheers brutha. Z
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20-09-2009 07:20 |
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