 Anarky - Space Lines |
Anarky 
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Registration Date: 02-08-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Space Lines' and post your comments here!
Safe.this a preveiw of a track i started yesterday,still loads to do but got main b-line in,let me kno if ur feelin this/or not!
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08-09-2009 16:34 |
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Z Day
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Yo man. First off, thanks for the words of advice on my tune. Really appreciate it man 
The first thing I notice in this track is the lack of energy. The drums are ok, I think the snare isn't as punchy as it should be. The kick is good. The roffels in between the kick and snare are a bit empty, maybe use some amen or circles hats/rides to fill them out? Classic breaks always work wonders 
The bass needs to be distorted, eq'd, resampled etc. It's not massive enough man! Everything in the tune needs to have more BOOM (if you know what I mean)
Especially with this sort of neuro stuff you really need that slam factor. Especially when bringing in the drop. But worry about that when you're making the real tune man: 
Peace. Good track. Lots of potential.
Zackl
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08-09-2009 21:50 |
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BattleDrone
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None of the sounds convince me really. Track sounds really weird, it's missing "glue".
The drums should be more smashy (especially the kick and snare sound way too soft). Some drum variations sound plain weird and very robotic. The whole drumthing needs extra stuff to get it to sound full. The basses sound like you have thrown in some this'n thats, but that doesn't make it a tune. Sound quality is good though.
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08-09-2009 22:36 |
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thechronic
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Some nice ideas in this, I like how the bassline and the eerie atmospheric lines interact, they alternate in a very interesting way.
The drums bother me a bit, the programming is nice, but there is a bit of a lack of dynamics which is mainly due to the limited amount of samples used. This is especially noticeable when you trigger several kicks or snares in a row. Try making a range of alternate samples, with slight changes in pitch, volume and filtering, to make it more lively.
I like the dark atmosphere too. I like where this is heading, unfortunately the preview is a bit short, when I get the feeling it is about to break loose the preview ends 
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09-09-2009 13:30 |
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Zugzwang
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Ez mate,
Really brilliant vibe on this one, I think the atmosphere is captured well. There's a lot of potential in this track, here are a couple of things I think would help:
Subtly add a bit more distortion and EQ on your deep "waaah, waaaah" bass (that's in the beginning of the song) to give it more crunch, this will help drive your tune. Being subtle is the key here though.
All of the intro FX sounds very nice, I think a pad would help glue them all together and make everything cohesive.
The hi-hats sound a little thin and don't do justice to the massive rolling potential this song has. I recommend getting a thicker hat and/or throwing and distorting a break behind the kick and snare, this will give it a lot of shuffle and really get people dancing!
Snare could probably use a clap on top of it to make it really "snap" like a whip.
Very good start mate, just needs a couple tweaks imho!
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09-09-2009 14:36 |
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Anarky
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cheers boyz-ye main critisiscms wer the drumz-2 b honest i was xperimentin wiv the beat - tryed many diffrent layers n nuffin seemed to work or fit so jus left it for now,but goin off reveiws i will defo b addin 2 and beefin up my beat-this jus a preveiw newayz-will b flat out on this nx 5 days n hopefully get better,crisper,finished version up.cheers agen 4 comments
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09-09-2009 16:41 |
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IridionDNB
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Registration Date: 12-09-2009
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Well, there is some new elements in this tune. I am not a big fan of the wobbles however. I would also suggest beefing up the drums. Try finding a harder snare or try layering some to get a fuller sound. As for the professionalism of the track, you are not ranking high. Try to add lots more atmospherics such as fat pads. Good start, and digging the theme. Safe.
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12-09-2009 08:33 |
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hatmanafro
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Registration Date: 12-09-2009
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i lke that bass man, i also like the drum patterns and the way u kinda mixed it u a little bit, time to get a melody in there man
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13-09-2009 07:01 |
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