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TTT31
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Registration Date: 24-08-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Uvidime By Ttt31' and post your comments here!
I play with reason today after lunch check what i made, i am still very big noob want to get to my track some more speed like spor but i cant :-DDdDDD many many hours i will must sit with reason :-DDDD check track and write some review for my improving thanks a lot
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06-09-2009 17:29 |
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TTT31
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Registration Date: 24-08-2009
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and it is my second track in my live so save me a little :-DDD
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06-09-2009 18:03 |
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Crazy J 
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Registration Date: 04-08-2009
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Needs alot of wrk - layering beats, compression, more beats. I think the scream kinda noises play abit too much and gets annoying after a while. Nether the less I think its a good 1st track and a good start.
Keep it up.
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07-09-2009 12:29 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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Noob or not you certainly have some good ideas 
The gnarling lead line and brooding feel is great, I love this, and the variety throughout the preview. It's very quirky and twists unexpectedly, a true sign of quality in my book. Some leads are squirming in sheer agony in the background.
Where you need some practice is in the balance, your levels are way off. I'll give some pointers:
- you have this reversed delay + reverb thing on the snare which pans in stereo. It's huge, it overpowers the rest of the track, but it distracts and really would be better in the background. Take it down 10dB and your track will instantly sound much more defined.
- where is the kick and the bass? round out the low end! You probably have your sub woofer up too loud while producing, typical noob thing to do (no offense lol!!)
Work a bit more in stereo, you can't make up for a good stereo image with wildly panning effects 
Anyway I really like your style, I'm going to keep an eye on you. You definitely got talent but just need some practice, am looking forward to hearing how your productions will sound in 6 months!!
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09-09-2009 13:43 |
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