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wulf
Producer
Registration Date: 22-12-2003
Posts: 27
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12-04-2004 15:26 |
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djfreemc 
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Registration Date: 25-07-2003
Posts: 1,117
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I like the way you generally build the track up. I think u need to work out the drums more in the beginning, they get better towards the end. maybe add something to fill up the space between da drums and the bass, some kind of melody thing. Another thing u need to work on imo are the drops, try make them hit harder u know...
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12-04-2004 20:19 |
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madgamer2000
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 12-04-2004
Posts: 30
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This is a long track, and towards the end i was feeling it could use a little bit more variation, or at least layering another element over what is going on. The sound clips at the front seemed a little bit too loud imo as well. I like the drums a lot though. They are definately not the usual dnb fare, but i liked them none the less. Last thing; i thought the ending was a bit too abrupt. Perhapse you could end the synth, then the strings just a little bit later. I like the song though.
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13-04-2004 02:42 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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The crowdsounds are too loud
Don't really like the kick, it doesn't really kick. Give it a bit more low-end.
Strings are nice and dark.
Your leadmelody (with the lfo on it) sounds more like a filler than a real lead. This doesn't really help the track to sound intresting.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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14-04-2004 11:25 |
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