 alternate force - Why Dont U Say |
alternate force 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 23-01-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Why Dont U Say' and post your comments here!
hi there .. bin some time since my last track , unfortunately my production skills were slipping according to u lot .. so ive gone back , worked harder and now "HOPEFULLY" ive come back stronger 
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ive got some nice tunes on the way but this is a nice liquid track , quite simple , please let me know what u think or what could be improved ??
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http://www.myspace.com/dubkinetik
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04-09-2009 20:26 |
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Crazy J
Sponsor
Registration Date: 04-08-2009
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I like this. The vocals are nice. Very simple tune but has a nice vibe. The bass is nice with the string. I think a little more could be done with the beats just to fill it out. Great track tho.
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"It's not how much you do, it's how much love you put into the doing!..."
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04-09-2009 21:33 |
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Evasive Action
joeuk
Registration Date: 25-11-2008
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likin the vibe mate, nice and super-chilled! the minimal drums are sweet, very atmospheric with the sweeps and vocals, and the flute sample fading in and out is a cool touch. really like it mate, nice lounge dnb. could see myself listenin to this after a heavy night out just kickin back. if i was gonna add anything id maybe think about the odd rumble/growl type bass lick every here n there - nothing heavy just subtle like. sweet track mate
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07-09-2009 19:05 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Nice intro mate. Think your pad would sound a bit better if you cut some of the middle out, it is clashing with the vocal. Like the vocals a lot.
Your kick could do with a bit more high end.
Take a bit of mid out of the rhodes aswell. It is making the track sound a bit muddy.
Right then. This is a really nice track and actually quite refreshing. It is a bit muddy. The hook at about 4.30 should of been placed as the drop about 1.30 and the rest of the song should of been structured on that really. As you have it at the moment, it isn't really a tune as such, more some nice ideas. This tune does have some good potential though 
Take those idea and create something real nice
Enjoyed it bro
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08-09-2009 01:11 |
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