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wrm
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Please check out my new track 'Eager 4 U' and post your comments here!

Ok people, the preview got some nice feedback, thanks a lot. Hope you gonna like the finnished product. Big ups dotbe crew!

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29-08-2009 00:31 Homepage of wrm
TTT31
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sweet
29-08-2009 13:40
Anarky Anarky is a male
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safe mate.is it jus me or did u use 2 make mainly jump-upConfused mite b finkin sum1 els)newayz-fair play the intro is soundin wicked-very nice atmos n fx n stuff.this 1 really aint 4 me but it sounds absolute quality productiobn wise.even tho i dont personally like it i fink that distorted guitar/bass sounds pucker in the mix-this sounds quite a commercial track-i cud imagine it being played on the radio or summin.newayz like i say this track aint 4 me but can hear the production quality so fair play!o ye 1 fing i wud say but its totally my preference-is a shorter intro.ez

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29-08-2009 18:47 Homepage of Anarky
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hey anarky, nope, I have never done jump up Smile but thanks for review bro Wink

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29-08-2009 19:09 Homepage of wrm
m-ej m-ej is a male
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loving the feel of this m8,
reaching for me rizlas right now.
intros super sexy, sounds top notch on me cans,
this is the kinda dnb id part cash with.
duznt seem like 6.21 mins, feels like theres a lot more to come from this track,
guess thats a sign of a top tune bro.
no complaints this end, keep them coming and keep making me smile with this vibe.

(fuck it gonna play it againCool )

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29-08-2009 21:09
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Perfect all over. Big Grin

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30-08-2009 12:56 Homepage of Uberchile
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don't have time to review, just gotta say, this tune is fuckin wicked mate!!

loved ever minute of the the journey, 5th/6th time around, can't get enough


you've improved so much

nice one

cheers

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30-08-2009 20:44
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nice intro , love the build-up- everything sits perfectly with each other

drums are very nice and crisp

love the guitar, maybe the pads a tad loud in the chorus

not much to say quality track tho!
keep it up!
30-08-2009 21:30
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Sweet baby Jesus, this is good! Definitely feeling this one bro. I can see where the high scores come from.

Melodies are super. I was hooked from the first few bars right till the end. Like the others, I didn't realise it was so long and when it finished I just wanted more.

OK, a few minor cricitisms...

Some of the big sections sound a bit crowded. There's too many different melodies and similar frequencies fighting for the same space. Needs more clarity in there. You need to think about which sounds you could lose without losing the overall feel. I would definitely think about cutting some of the low-mid frequencies from some of the sounds, probably the background strings and the distorted guitar. Let the bass and the kick do the low and low-mid work.

If you could sort those issues out, you'd surely have a hit on your hands mate. Keep up the progress, absolutely loving this!

Dance Listen

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31-08-2009 09:27 Homepage of Tomos
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Very good indeed. Sweet sweet melodies!

agree with Tom on the lack of clarity in the main parts and the sub could also be a bit fatter, just like it was in the first seconds.

would work nicely as a movie score I recon.

it does its high rating justice. Bigup
03-09-2009 20:36 Homepage of Gregg
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you know i love this Big Grin

big tune wrm

peas

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04-09-2009 23:42 Homepage of Binary Havoc
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thanks for wicked replies guys. And thanks for mastering tips. I am gonna check those issues out when I am ready with school atm. See ya

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06-09-2009 20:01 Homepage of wrm
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Wow. Very good track - Intro is very smooth. Kinda sounds like a Bungle production. Top track WRM.

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mate this is a seriously good piece of work, very, very nice. the intro is sweet, in fact fuck it what can i say the whole thing is amazing. fair play mate very impressive stuff. good luck!
07-09-2009 19:37
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oh man.. i rele enjoyed that rich warm sound of that pad at the beggining, along with the atmospheric high hat, very welll done and a nice way to set the mood of the whole track, the sub that came in after that along with the kick warmed it up even more. very good transition into that melody. very liquid like, just my thing. the whole thing is rele melodramatic. haha. rele good. i waited forever for the beat to drop but i guess that helps with the tension and mood, that distorded guitar in the backround is pretty nice, i mean, i cant rele spot out flaws.. this shit sounds rele pro.. very nice, kind of a tear jerker kinda track. lol
14-09-2009 00:36
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now checking.....

Nice synth sounds 'ere....
reckon it would sound nicer without the hi hat until the kick drum comes in.

breakdown time.....all sounding very epic Big Grin

loving the strings here, very uplifting....

still building up nicely, the tension is rising......to the drop........

or more breakdown............Tongue ..........

oh nooooo distorted guitar Frown ...... sorry just not a big fan of it really. Perhaps use it later in the track so it has more of a progressive feel.

Also I think the drop could of been worked a little better imo. Its going to be hard to explain what I mean over the internet but here goes.....

You have the part where its buildiong and building in the breakdown, with the beats filtering in......
then everything drops out, to leave just the strings and pads......

I personally think you should just have 2 or possibly 4 bars of this bit (where it all drops out) then drop it in with a roll of some sort.
Would mess up djs etc because if the arrangement but i think it would really work for the track.

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Absolutely lush intro.

Once the bass comes in everything starts coming together, really cohesive sound mate.

I like the drop a lot. Melody is very good, interesting dynamic between drum and bass + guitar elements that you pulled off well.

Can't really complain mate, very nicely done! Looking forward to hearing more stuff from you!
14-09-2009 12:47
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<3

That pretty much sums it up.

I'm going to need a 320 of this. Smile

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Intro can use some more elements before the deep pad come in to make it a little more interesting, don't want to loose the listener in the first min. Build to the drop is nice. Like the drumz, like the dist guitars. Breakdown is nice. Like all the different guitars, the reverb and delay on them is nice. Cheers. Z

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ez matey! i saw this when i was out on holiday, all the good comments, had to check it out Big Grin

seriously love the atmos n melodies. i can hear a lot of work has been put into the arrangement, as always, the finer details have been worked on really well Bigup

yeah defo one of ur best tunes man, signed this one yet?


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