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i am novice in world about producing a know that this track is awfull but i want to get your opinions for my improvement some cognitionals and advices from more experienced producers can be really GOOD i amuse on your review lot truly thanks and dont
Some odd melodies in the intro. I would re-think some tones if I were you. Drums needs to be more upfront and clear. The synth drowns everything when it kicks in and everything gets a bit messy suddenly. I like the breakdown at 2:15, I would build a completely new track upon that part
. The track is pretty original but it need more precise hand and better mix. Big up for originality.
but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
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Its has too much melodies i think too much things goin on. Reece and drums fittin together, and create a very old skoolish vibe. You can make like 4 tracks out of this one, just simplify and concentrate on your sounds. Only put sounds in it that give certain shivers when you listen to it.
something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
Originally posted by BattleDrone
but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
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Anyway your tune. something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
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i am novice in world about producing a know that this track is awfull but i want to get your opinions
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This post has been edited 3 time(s), it was last edited by brucifer: 31-08-2009 23:27.
Anyway your tune. something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
everything is like too loud dude.. you need to mix this down. that sample sounds like a seal diying..
hahhaa.. not trying to be rude. the structior is very rough. like.. things come in very violently... almost scared me.. that saw. is rele rele loud. again. gotta work on your mixing
Like the snare in the intro, sounds a bit loud on the pre-drop though. Like the heavy distorted synth, it came in a bit abrupt and is a little load, turn the highs down a tad and give it a little more mids. Realy like the synth and drumz @ 2:40, like the breathes. Nice tune, just needs a little work. Cheers brutha. Z