intro is way too empty, drums and percussion elements are nice, don't like the horn synth... sounds a bit too strange
bass is ok... try adding some FX maybe, cuz the whole track just sounds a bit too empty. and everything just gets repeated after 2:10... add some changes
first i would say that thar hihat is too abrasive, i would use a different one and use nicer reverb.
the brass synth that comes in around the second half of the eight bar loop isnt great i would use a completely different sound, at the moment it is very thin and much like a bad synth preset.
the main bass line that comes in is fairly decent, got a good wobble and i love a good wobble!
i would layer the drums up a bit. the snare is very dull, put a snare with a good snappy top end to it on top.
the tune carries potential, but neads a few elements changed and the mix cleaned up.
really? into is like a nightmare childs play zone. way to sparse. Needs a heavy pad. Can tell you spend some time on the drum programming. but the bass lines are straight out of malstrom and subtractor, I can hear that subtractor filter. Am I right? Your trying to grasp the concepts and you have some of them the key is just to spend a lot of time shaping your sounds and using samples combined with your own synth sounds. Drums are good. Other sounds are not. Keep listening to stuff u love and anlyzing it. Also try to steer clear of ascending major scales, just sounds cheesy. Good job tho man keep it up.
i like jump :-) but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
Originally posted by TTT31
i like jump :-) but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
TT31 stop copy and pasting and write a real review. How did you ever pass the reviews in order to become a producer? Copy and pasting?
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Anyway it does not sound bad, just a little boring. Bass sound is way to basic, as are the other instrument sounds. Also the intro needs more, like pads or fx or just something.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Travis_Huckins: 01-09-2009 05:27.
bass is ok... try adding some FX maybe, cuz the whole track just sounds a bit too empty. and everything just gets repeated after 2:10... add some changes 
