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Suspender
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Please check out my new track 'Reck' and post your comments here!

I´m trying to finish this track

Could really use your help!!!!
25-08-2009 00:45
rez rez is a male
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starts off really cool, i think it would sound better if the atmospheric sounds in the intro wouldn't get cut off... like just go on constantly. nice drop man, cool basses! track has potential... some more FX could help. vocal fits well, liking the synths. the last two minutes were a bit repetetive... oh well, still a nice track mate!

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25-08-2009 02:03
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Thanks for your help mate!!!!
I actually agree with what u said.
Cheers
R
25-08-2009 03:44
Uberchile Uberchile is a male
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Liking intro vibe

Hmm bass line seems out of tune

Snare is lacking punch, vocals don't fit to well imo.

I like at 2:05 when sub kicks with everything, this bit is my favorite so far.

Kick is getting drowned out by the sub.

Pretty cool vibe here tho. Drum work is v.good just needs EQ or compression on kick and snare to bring them forward.

Ends quite suddenly. try gradualy reducing number of layers then fade out.

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25-08-2009 09:03 Homepage of Uberchile
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Thanks mate i´ll try and do some changes....
I appreciate your comment.
R
25-08-2009 11:48
Anarky Anarky is a male
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safe mate-likin the eerie atmos in intro.o yes likin the sound of the bass as its cummin in.read ova reveiws an agree wiv the comment about cuttin that eerie pad off so much in the intro.gotta say i agree wiv the comment that sed dont fink the vocal works too well-in my opinion it sounds a bit cheesy an mayb shud b in a happy hardcoreb track.takes a wile but wen it drops i really likin it mate-sounds fukin wiked in fact!like little 3.44 drop.fink ur subs soundin nice n fat n drumz sound pretty good 2 me-overall think with a much shorter intro n get a darker soundin vocal(maybe process the 1 u got)this got fat potential mate

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25-08-2009 17:46 Homepage of Anarky
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Cheers Anarky
I´ll c what i can do about it.
R
25-08-2009 20:02
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Drums are too silent in the intro.
Too many things are being played simultaneously in the intro.
The helium vocal sounds very oldskool.
Main part isn't too bad, drums could use some extra clarity. Bass sounds muffled.
At times there are several different bass sounds playing together, this sounds a bit messy try to use 1 bass at a time and add some non bass elements for fullness if you need it.
Tune is quite ok, with some minor adjustments it is finished.

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25-08-2009 21:29 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Yeah man

We still have to do some work in this tune,but the reason i´ve put it here was to get this kind of feedback,now i´ve a better idea on what should we change.

It will be finished soon...

CHEERS R n J
25-08-2009 23:38
Dethworm Dethworm is a male
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I can hear some FX loops playing. The loops are too loopy and repetative but the sounds are good. Try to put some heavy reverb on them and stretch them out. Overall the track sounds ameraturish but I was the same way a year and half ago so don't worry you already have a lot of skills under your belt. Its like 1.5 stars away from being top notch so don't give up. The bass sound is a little to simple for my taste and needs some other sounds to fill it out. Really get two layers in there to beefen up the bass with a sine wave. You need also two basslines alternating and playing on each other. The sequencing sounds too 4/4 quantized try to make it a bit more complex with FILTER AUTOMATIONS (not capitalized to be an ass just for emphasis) this is very important! Get some filter sweeps and other little delacisies on the sounds used here to really let us feel the movement. Drums sound overall pretty good but thats probabally becuase there just a looop playing over and over. Get some variation in there by editing the loops. Even a little goes a long way. This isnt bad tho so really keep it up. Any specific questions just ask.

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