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the high pitched sound in the intro is a bit too sharp at some points xD a lot of variation going on here, that's good! cool break, don't really like the kick sample... but that's a question of taste. funny and twisting bassline, overall a nice track!
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25-08-2009 01:58 |
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Uberchile
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Bells make my ears hurt at intro (try not to use bell sounds because they have wierd frequencys that can be quite painful sometimes.
Kick sounds a little stunted at the beggining but it fits with the vibe later on. Bass is pretty cool but i would bring in the call and answer section around 2:00 in earlier.
Sub is nice.
ahhh more bells
Snare drum sounds like its missing some snap to it try layering a crispy sample over the top or Eqing to bring out some splash.
I like the bassline on this one just get rid of them bells for a pad or some FX.
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25-08-2009 08:53 |
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BattleDrone
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Drums in intro sound really cut off and mechanical.
Those bells sound quite random.
In the break (after 30") the drums still sound very "sliced" and the snare sounds floppy.
The bass sounds a bit dull and muffled, it has no real low end and is to dominant in the 200-800Hz area also the bass seems to have stereo on it, this takes away the power.
Has potential, needs work.
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25-08-2009 21:32 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Drums in intro sound really cut off and mechanical.
Those bells sound quite random.
In the break (after 30") the drums still sound very "sliced" and the snare sounds floppy.
The bass sounds a bit dull and muffled, it has no real low end and is to dominant in the 200-800Hz area also the bass seems to have stereo on it, this takes away the power.
Has potential, needs work.
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25-08-2009 21:32 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Wow mate, those bell will seriously fuck ya hearing up mate. carefull with high pitched frequecies.
Certainly better constructed than you last track. Nice and simple but effective.
Not a bad tune at all mate.
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26-08-2009 02:04 |
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Anarky
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Registration Date: 02-08-2009
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safe 4 comments an advice.ye-i thought that bell synth in intro was too hi-i have now bounced the intro n break 'bells' n hav put a bit of hi-cut eq to cut off those really hi sharp frequencys whilst still leavin enuff hi to keep the sound clear-much better-thanks!
only fing im not sure about is the comment of ther bein no/not much sub bass n it bein panned as my speakers are not the best n i can still hear the lo-end bass an also ther cant be any pannin as i have bounced my sub down to a mono track n it seems completely center??fair comment bout the drumz soundin bit robotic tho, honestly, that was what i was going for tho-fair enuff tho if u dont like it
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26-08-2009 18:30 |
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TTT31
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i like jump :-) but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of subbasses and some effect on lead distortion maybe an layer it. it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)
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28-08-2009 16:51 |
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fantasque
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nice track overall!pretty tight production.sounds good on my monitors. i also do like the wobble bass which is going nicely hand in hand with the rhythm. i always like when people use a common dnb rhythm but drop a kickdrum here and there. so the rhythm doesnt get boring. always a winner! maybe you could a gritty bass line to your track. but besides that i like it. good work. keep the music coming.
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01-09-2009 06:05 |
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Nick ZZ
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Nice wobbles sounds like it can use one more high layer, cone the layers and add a layer at low volume with just freqs abouve 2000khz, should make it a little crisper, drum are alright. Like the wbobble variations. Goof tune brutha.
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