 Anarky - Shuttle Boom |
Anarky 
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Registration Date: 02-08-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Shuttle Boom' and post your comments here!
safe.bin workin on this few 4 days now,b-line was inspired by subfocus massive tutorial on u tube.ne feedbak/advice good as usual an also can u let me kno wot u fink of the change of melody/bass in the break n 2nd drop.cheers
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19-08-2009 01:05 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Weird structure, buildups that lead to nowhere, extra snare coming in, pads added,... keep the structure simple and clean.
The part after 4:30 is actually quite good.
The whole thing sounds like you are mixing different tunes all the time.
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19-08-2009 23:36 |
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Anarky
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cheers 4 ciomments mate.ye fink i rushed it-this tune absolutely dun my hed in-went bak n forth btween the 2 diffrent main b-lines n decided i liked them both so tryed incorporatin both of them-but obv ant worked out-n ye totally agree iv gone ott n the tune sounds all over the shop.neways like i sed this tune dun my hed in so bad, so iv binned it off now n started anuva-much better structure n overall better tune i fink.wud really appreciate if u cud find time 2 comment on that wen i put it on here(bout 5 days)as i value ur advice!(member i was on here bout a year ago n u reveiwed 1 of my tunez n gave me sum fuckin PRICELESS advice bout eq'in my drumz n certain frequencys-was all jus numbers 2 me at the time but it has slowly sunk in n all makes sense now!safe
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20-08-2009 16:51 |
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subinfector
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I agree with Battledrone, at 4:30 and a bit after, it's really good. Too much that I'm not diggin' though (in other parts). Feels all over the place. I would grab the stuff after 4:30 and build a track around it. You've got something worth building off in there!
Cheers,
SubInfector
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22-08-2009 07:13 |
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Anarky
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Totally agree mate.cheers!
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22-08-2009 16:07 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Hello mate, thanks for the review.
Right then, your drums need more power behind them. You seem to have one loop running very quiet compared to the other.
Personally, not over keen on the bass sound, needs more mid range.
You have some nice pad sounds 
2:20 things are going nice around here
The bridge needs working on, it sounds a bit confused.
3:55 Nice stuff here
The sub sounds a lot better to.
Right then, personally, I think the song a bit confusing. I would take a couple of good point, possibly the ones I have marked out and create some thing new out of them.
The bit around the 6 min mark is cool.
The secret about a good tune is keeping it simple but interesting, if you put to many aspect into it, it get confusing and turns into a muddle.
thanks again
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23-08-2009 02:37 |
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