 Anarky - Once There Was A Time |
Anarky 
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Registration Date: 02-08-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Once There Was A Time' and post your comments here!
Safe every 1-this jus a preveiw wich so far i am fairly happy with(4 once!) but ne feedbak on ne mixdown/eq issues u spot plz let me kno-n on tune aswell.cheers! o ye-sum advice on how to get sum more tension in my build-up wud be great.safe
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12-08-2009 18:23 |
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rez
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sounds all a bit too muddy and muffled at the start, hehe liking the 0:45 buildup... nice little edits so far... cool drop, sub could be more upfront... very cool effects on bassline. hmm about the tension in intro, maybe try out some pads to create more tension... or a melody change... i like the buildup tho ^^
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13-08-2009 03:56 |
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sAv
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ok, this is a nice track. i like the realy dark ambient.
bassline i great and the snare rocks alot 
go on!
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13-08-2009 10:24 |
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BattleDrone
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Not to keen on the halfspeed/fullspeed switching.
Main part doesn't catch me, the bass could be more alive and energetic, use some filter automation to achieve that. Drumwork is ok though.
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13-08-2009 13:04 |
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lead:end
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wohohohoow pinball machiinee, took me a while to get to the final drop hehe, i dig the gnarly dry bassline, nice variation in lines and stuff, eq and shit sounds got to me, but i ain't no pro tho.. i like the tune altho ju could like let the bass fade sometimes because is a gets a bit monotome even if the bassline variates so much, maybe make a variation in frequency on the bass itself just pop it in once in a while.. great tune peace
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13-08-2009 22:10 |
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Anarky
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Safe 4 reveiws n sum good comments evry1.kno wot u sayin bout the sorta halfspeed switch on 32bars battledrone-cud be confusin/awkward for dj 2 mix myb!ye i hav tryd automatin the filter out on the bass on evry last 4 of 32 bars n track already soundin much better-cheers!!1nce agen cheers for feedbak-has really giv me the drive 2 go on an finish this track proper!
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13-08-2009 22:54 |
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Not that often you hear a jump up track on here mate so fair play, something a bit different
Really like the varaition in the drums during the intro / drop (although im not too keen on the 1/2 time switch up either) The drum programming is pretty tight. I'm not sure about some of the drum samples you've used but thats just IMO.
Bassline is solid, needs more power though, maybe crank that up a bit make it thump through the mix a bit more, keep at it mate, nice work so far!
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13-08-2009 23:40 |
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Anarky
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Bassline is solid, needs more power though, maybe crank that up a bit make it thump through the mix a bit more
-ye safe mate-hav done that now and defo adds more overall power to the track,didnt re-eq it, jus like u sed pumped the volumes an re mixed the ova channels-luv me jump-up!safe 4 comments mate!
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13-08-2009 23:52 |
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subinfector
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Cool stuff man. I feel like it should kick in at :43. Already have a two builds in there. You have four more before the payoff. Too long. You could save a couple of the builds for later.
Bass sound a bit muffled. Maybe need to eq or add a midrange sound to punch it? I feel like you need a bigger break later in the track. Really pull out most the sound, then build up again in a different way from the beginning build.
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17-08-2009 02:02 |
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Nick ZZ
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