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Sundancer Sundancer is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Words Are Not Enough' and post your comments here!

Hey folks,

It has been quite some time since I actually finished a tune, I had a lot of stress and shit on my head, and I wasn't quite happy with a couple of tunes I started, so I dumped them.

Critique is welcome, let me know what you think.


Cheers,

Sundancer.

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10-08-2009 02:53 Homepage of Sundancer
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez mate, been a while! great to hear some new material from ya Big Grin

fuckin sweeeeet atmopsherics right from the start, absolutely loving this!! the whole intro is just lush, really intense - sick

personally (imo ofcourse) would have preferred a more subtle snappy type snare for this kinda tune (maybe a matrix / future bound type sound if ya get me) as the one u got is a bit harsh sounding in comparison to the all the other lovely atmospheric elements

anyways overall this is probably the best thing i heard on here in a good while - keep em comin! Rinse

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10-08-2009 15:32 Homepage of Ketz
rez rez is a male
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great vibe from the beginning on, really well sounding first minute... hmm i think the beat could be a bit crispier... cool vocals! yeah don't really know what to say else, this track is amazing! i bet your happy with this tune ;D i would be haha

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10-08-2009 17:10
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ez man great atmos in the build here mate really like the subtle vocals (i think) this tune reminds me of some of the enigma tracks Smile wich is very good as the atmos are always great really like the drums on the drop however the low end seems really quiet. maybe the notes are really low. however i think if the low end was a bit louder and had more oomph esp the sub the tune would benefit a lot. really though you get that right and you got a tune mate. cus the atmos is badass Big Grin the pads and mids in general sound very nice and easy listening. very cool tune mate
10-08-2009 17:52
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Long but good intro, nice tension building.
Very trance oriented once more, bass could be more upfront (taste). Breakdown is nice, second drop is ok. Lovely tune, could have a harder structure fir my taste, but I can't complain really.

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10-08-2009 18:48 Homepage of BattleDrone
Sundancer Sundancer is a male
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Thanks for the feedback!

I'll listen to the track with fresh ears in a couple days and see if I can improve something.

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11-08-2009 10:18 Homepage of Sundancer
Gregg Gregg is a male
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This deserves its high rating. Great atmospheric elements, nothing sounds cheap or cheesy. The more subtle bass work incorporates nicely with the rest and fits ace.

All I’d really work on is a deeper low end. You could compensate the lack of depth with a lower hitting and less bouncy kick (which imo would fit better).
I’d rather emphasize the sub by adding more compression and harmonic excitement than just cranking it up but you know the deal.

keep up the good work!
11-08-2009 12:34 Homepage of Gregg
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Instantly recognized the vocals from Exodus (Noisia). Beauty intro. Lovin it. Great atmospherics throughout the tune. Really dreamy stuff. The weakest part is the drums. They dont push through enough. Dunno if the sounds you used for the drums are well picked. Besides that the choon is a great peace of work man. Big ups for creativity and melodies.

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12-08-2009 15:14 Homepage of wrm
Anarky Anarky is a male
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nice intro-likin the beats filterin in n everyfin is cummin in 2geva sweet-sound quality n eqin sounds pucker-lush drumz wen it drops however did notice wot ketz sed n me too wud personally prefer a deeper thuddier snare.jus pers taste too think i wud like a touch more boost on the sub.likin the subtle bass edits-growlin.overall track is bit too chillin 4 me but can appreciate the production.fair play

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12-08-2009 18:50 Homepage of Anarky
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Absolutely amazing, just absolutely amazing. words really are not enough for this track! Love the minor 3rd chord change.
16-08-2009 03:27
Sundancer Sundancer is a male
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Thanks again for the feedback, tried to improve the low end a little bit, hope I didn't over do it. Track updated on MySpace.

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16-08-2009 18:53 Homepage of Sundancer
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-Drumz sound nice
-Like the vocals
-Parts of the vocals sound very Asian
-The song can use a few more drum edits
-Dig it brutha! Z

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Aint got time to write much gotta go to work, but i gotta say i love this tune mate, awesome. respect is due
17-08-2009 10:04
Sundancer Sundancer is a male
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Thanks a lot, I worked hard on it, feedback appreciated.

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17-08-2009 11:28 Homepage of Sundancer
Tomos Tomos is a male
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I can't say anything that hasn't already been said. I just wanted to add my full support for such a super tune. It instantly gave me goose bumps and kept me wanting more once it finished. Suuuper! More! More! Big Grin

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22-08-2009 11:19 Homepage of Tomos
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yummy from wot i can hear m8,
seems i bit light on the sub bass,
get that sorted out as demure has said,,,,,,tune Smile

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03-09-2009 10:44
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