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monoxide
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Registration Date: 02-08-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Warpin-dubstep' and post your comments here!

this 1 aint been mastered yet but main compossin done av a listen and let me know what ya think .......


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09-08-2009 16:40
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
2161... the future.


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Introducing hihat with "yo" vocal is not working.
Panned hihats = bad
"Here's Johnny" doesn't fit in there.
Lead synth sounds like a cheap hiphop song is comming up. Needs a drop at 2 minutes where some subbass layer is added (with long steady notes) to give it a certain fullnes.
Tune totally lacks sub action now (which is the power of dubstep more or less).

Has potential... needs work

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09-08-2009 22:43 Homepage of BattleDrone
alternate force alternate force is a male
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ez .. well not bad .. needs some work .. the synth needs to stop at the time when the bass comes in 4 a drop , it goes on 4 to long IMO .. here jonny vocal needes some work maybe some mid to higher end and a bit of reverb .. yeah that synth goes on 4 way too long !!

not great has potential !!

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10-08-2009 13:31
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