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Uberchile Uberchile is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Dream' and post your comments here!

Hi Everyone,

I have been on holiday for 3 weeks so I was starved of my computer and had alot of inspiration and came out with this track.

Does it need anything else

Thanks for any reviews/comments

-UC-

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09-08-2009 11:54 Homepage of Uberchile
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez mate, realy like the piano riff, drums sounding solid n love the lil rolls sprinkled here n there Bigup

i would be tempted to bring the sub forward just a tad, only cuz the drums are pretty punchy in this would sit better that way imo. another small suggestion - maybe try keep the piano bit for intro / breakdowns n try introduce another element - be it another synth or mid bass to make a more obvious change for the drop?

anyways minor critique, love the melodies throughout - wicked choon! Bigup

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09-08-2009 14:14 Homepage of Ketz
Uberchile Uberchile is a male
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cheers Ketz, thanks for the feedback... anyone else?

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09-08-2009 14:51 Homepage of Uberchile
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ketz pretty much summed up the track nice chilled roller thumbs up on this 1
09-08-2009 16:58
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Piano is quite dominant, would like the mid bass to be more in front (after all it is DnB).
Somehow those piano melodies sound "over educated" like you know damn well how to play a piano. Simpler melodies that support the groove would do better I guess.

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09-08-2009 22:46 Homepage of BattleDrone
demure demure is a male
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really nice drum rolls man Big Grin the drums really are nice piano stabs and melodys work well nice little subtle fx going on. think the pad sounds a little out of key though, may just be the sound you used. some nice ideas all the same though Smile
10-08-2009 17:59
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Lovely, lovely melodies here mate. Like Battle said tho, you need more oomph from the bass. It sits too far in the background for a dnb tune. The piano is dominant from start to finish. It might be an idea to have a section where you switch things up a bit and stop the piano for a while. Your beats are very clear and balanced. They actually sound a bit loud to me? Overall tho, it's a very nice tune mate.

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22-08-2009 11:02 Homepage of Tomos
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Always enjoy you piano tracks mate, lets see what this one gives. Happy

Certainly needs more bass.

Bring the vocals forward aswell.

around the 2.30 mark, bring those percusive bleeps forward.

Right then, you have another wicked track going, but for some reason, all your levels are off...

The piano is really nice. Some of it does remind me heavily of this though. I mean that in a good way Happy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=crEFfUuYwng

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23-08-2009 03:06
Krisch Krisch is a male
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Nice track man! Love the melodies in this one. The bass is a bit low as others noticed. I have to agree with Ketz, it'd be a good idea to change the piano for the main parts. It annoys me after a while. Maybe because its too loud. The pads could be a bit louder.
23-08-2009 20:02 Homepage of Krisch
Uberchile Uberchile is a male
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ok cheers for all the reviews i will play around with levels and rearrange a bit .

Thanks

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24-08-2009 15:42 Homepage of Uberchile
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