I'd save your start with the melody until later. Start with some simple percussion. do a small build and then break with your melody. Give the DJ something to mix to. then come in with your melody. The DJ won't want your melody when mixing, as it might not go with what's playing. Alright. After that, your melody before it kicks in is a little long. Cut it down a bit. You've got it at 45 seconds. Try to cut some of it. do the build faster. See next note, as perhaps, it's not too long.
Your melody opening cuts into the drums at :46. I'd have some hit of percussion during the melody build. something to tie in the next section. Also, before the drums hit at :46, you really need a drum fill or something to bridge that change. A sudden change in your score, doesn't usually work. It's just a change. Not cohesion between the parts. If you DO kick in hard with no build, then you need a massive explosion of sound that trails off after the first hit and then gets intense.
I like the hit at 1:30. I feel like by 1:40 though, it should have escalated massively and suddenly kick in hard.
It starts to get boring around 2:00 on. I think you rely too much on the snth sounds. You should try to program more into the drums. More change. and drop out the synth stuff more.
You have a bass sound that comes more clear around 2:46. It's in there earlier, but muddy. I'd really punch that bass sound, You should EQ all parts so the bass rips through and is powerful . It's a cool sound. Make it dominant.
i am a massive liquid fan and i love your beats really liked the build up to nice and subtle think the pianoee sound does get a bit annoying after a while but at points in the track really does make the tune bass gives it a nice warmth nothing to overpowerin keepin focused on the beats good mix down really brought the best od the drums out the only real critism i have of this track is the way the drums r brought in so abruptly i wouldnt say id run out and buy this track however if it was part of an ep with other tunes like this i would def buy it keep it up man ur doing well-monoxide
really not my kinda tune mate but fuk me sound quality sounds good!in my eyes(ears) this whole tune sounds pretty spot on an cant criticise.fair play nice to see u still bangin em out!
guitars are nice indeed. the tune sounds a little too nice though if im honest but i think it sounds good, mix is clean. think if the bassline flowed a bit better it may help. it sounds a little stop start. original tune
