subinfector
Producer
Registration Date: 29-07-2009
Posts: 22
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2:47 transition from the main sound falls flat. It is a change, but no build or transition. It's just a change. You should work on that.
Your main sound is cool, but goes on for a long time and doesn't evolve much. The low end feels lacking throughout. Maybe if you brought in your main sound, then ducked it out to hear some massive low end and then brought both of them in.
I almost feel like your bass drum is too intense. too much low end. It's more powerful than your bass. I feel your bass needs to control the show.
Let me just say, it's pretty good. It's obvious, you've not just put a bunch of crap together. I think now, it's more about really tweaking some of the sounds.
One your beakdown at 2:55, you've got the breakdown, but it still feels full and over powering. I think it should be thinner, still feels full. Not enough change from the earlier main part of the sound. Perhaps, you need to drop that (oh god, I can't explain the sound). Think about changing the main sound in that section. Then don't have the same hihats or drums.. change the pattern to a thin, tick tick tack tick. something alien from the main song and then kick back in with the main song.
That being said, It's pretty good. Not something I'd buy yet. That's the difference.
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