Track sounds empty, very empty. Maybe try putting some percussion loops in, some sound effects too. Intro doesn't seem to build up at all, just drops. You may have been trying for this effect but you still need some kind of build up so the drop is expected. Maybe try experimenting with some white noise and auto pan? Also try layering your drums a bit more, search the forum on this site for some good discussions on drum tracks. What DAW is it you are using? melody isn't all that bad and the sounds are pretty good imo. Keep it up bro, cheerz, Tuff.
fukin yes mate-absolutely luv it-wunt expectin that wobbly bass-wicked wen it drops n like how u switchin it between the wobble bass and the gritty one.duno wot it is but just feel the tunez lackin somethin to fill it out bit more-mayb sum atmospheric pads cud add to it-duno..really like the drumz u got goin on they r nice n snappy-cud mayb do sum more edits with the kik but still all the subtle edits uv done sound very nicely dun.if i was mixin still id defo wana drop this one in a mix.sound quality sounds pucker aswell-gotta listen to that agen-wicked tune!
