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djdred
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Registration Date: 01-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'fishNchipz' and post your comments here!!!
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06-04-2004 13:52 |
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is ok, but sounds a bit lo-fi. But the filtering is nice.
Drop doesn't work. The drums are simple and static and don't have any power. Second drop is much better -> much better beats. Kick seems a bit loud though.
Having only that simple bassline with the filter on it, the drums and a sub isn't very much for a whole track, but you did your best to keep it intresting, with lots of variations, which is good. Nontheless, the theme becomes a bit repetetive after a while
2.5/5
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06-04-2004 14:08 |
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gripz
Cool Producer


Registration Date: 16-11-2002
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U did put quite some work in this one, nice work on the beat sometimes it sounds like u mixed them in from a deck.
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Playschool comes 2 mind
U could try phattening the sound of ur bassline up with some overdrive.
Not a very good track but it ain't bad neither
work on it.
peace
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06-04-2004 15:04 |
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Sensa
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Registration Date: 14-01-2004
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General idea is good as surya says alot of variation to try and keep the listener interested, but for me its too digital sounding. nice production work tho
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09-04-2004 00:26 |
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djdred
Producer
Registration Date: 01-01-2004
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cheers alll for taking the time...peace
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19-04-2004 15:41 |
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I like the funky bline with the nice filter effect of course
Get a little bit more jazzy with it
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19-04-2004 19:20 |
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Muad'Dib
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Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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I can see Surya took some habits of mine
Kiddin
I'm just downloading the track.. 11% finished (damn I have to download everything using 65k ISDN single modem... expensive
)
W8... 18%... don't look at this typing, I really don't have anything to do at the moment...
While downloading, I shall start with my philosophies:
I realy believe that feminism is a bad thing, that should not be allowed. At least, the feminism with today's idea. It is a organized movement against the institution of family. If the man is working, and the woman is working, who will take care of the children?
Of course, here feminist would answer that there are institutions for that. But, the quality of institution is questionable. Even though they are good enough to take care of child's physical needs, they do NOT teach it how to form a family. They do NOT give him mother love, or father love. They give him social love, which is the very opposite, and which will create further frustrations in the child's mind.
Also, feminists can answer adversly that the husband can also take care of the children. But, they are fighting for equal rights, and NOT for that kind of discrimination against the man in the family.
It is obvious that we have huge differences between ourselves (men and women). If the child is taught that the institution of family is not good, it will never form a family, when it will grow older. It will never have children because of that, which is also a bad side of feminism. (75% done...)
There are no such equal rights that will even us, because we are biologicaly different! We ARE DIFFERENT! The very same biological differences apply for the animal world, and there the female takes care of the children (in the most of the cases) while the male hunts for food (works).
Don't fight it, or we will not have children, and your battle will be counter-humanity. Be forewarned of resistance of the idea of feminism (98% done...)
Now, let's get down on reviewing:
First, I'm noticing nice begining, though the snare are little dumb... And that hat in the background, it almost sounds like a distorted hat, or a snare. While it can be nice, here it seems like just added to fill the gaps. You can try using regular hats.
The drum rolls that build the buildup are too loud, decrease them a little. After the buildup the rhythm is nice, but not with much variations in it.
I see that you love doing those drumrolls, but the pauses (the moments where there aren't really much of the snares/kicks/rhythm/melody, just dull snares and kicks) are definetly out key. WHY? Because they are too much in the tune!
Yeah, as bitmipsyndicate said, the filter effects are nice.
The overall: the song is too short. I more liked your "Planet Bass" tune, it is nice
same as Surya: 2.5/5
nema lutenje (=don't get mad)
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19-04-2004 22:58 |
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Lightningflash
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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dont like the bass but can tell uv put a lot of work into this
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02-07-2007 00:25 |
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