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ObsidianDnB 
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Registration Date: 15-10-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Resuscitate' and post your comments here!
I have been stuck at m house for the last week and a half recovering from surgery.
Here is my latest installment.
Comments are very welcome.....
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22-07-2009 23:21 |
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demure
mastication fo de nation
Registration Date: 22-01-2009
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ez mate
so straight off the intro is ok i like the sound in the melody and the processing is ok i think the delay needs tightening on it tbh as it sounds slightly off and clutters the melody a bit. apart from that mate intro cool, maybe more elements.when it drops sounds really a lot better i like the melodys and the sounds, the snare sounds a bit too stereo tbh though
i would try using a stereo imager of some kind to narrow it down a bit, apart from that cool ideas
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23-07-2009 01:30 |
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MuzzyDNB
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hey mate.
not sure about the melodies on this one.
also, not sure if there is much sub either.
the drums are rlly nice imo, and the percussion in the introduction are sweet!
good job mate, just needs a lil bit more work and a bit more texture and it'l sound fine.
good mastering to!
well done.
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23-07-2009 18:53 |
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Gregg
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The melodies are a bit too random for my taste, it’s quite hard to pick up with the tune after the attention faded away just for a second. Try to structure them and let your motives be more recognizable so that as soon as they grow together the emerging phrase is easier to follow.
I’d also work the groove of that one raw lead you have. It can be programmed more effective in order to increase power & beef.
Cool shuffle at 1:39. place it somewhere else tho (for bildup or so) cause sadly it’s getting lost a bit.
Drums are full and flow well. Maybe eq your percussive elements some more (separate frequencies) to let the listener enjoy the sound of each element and not just the overall fusion.
Kick hits quite low and lacks a bit of body.
Overall, I like the mixture out of distorted and clean elements, adds a dirty clean flavour.
keep working.
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25-07-2009 15:49 |
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N-Vee
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Registration Date: 07-11-2008
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I like the mood of this track aye..good melodies and stuff an but just feel theres a bit of pitching outta tune specially just before the drop?? overall i think this tune has some potential aye. awesome mate
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28-07-2009 04:34 |
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TuffDread
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Registration Date: 26-04-2005
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dont really like the synth sound you are using in the beggining but when it breaks its a nice build up. Way too much gating on your synth when it drops imo, the synth sound you are using changes and sounds better after the drop tho. smart drum rolls you've got in there i like them a lot. cant really comment on your bass aspect because i'm listening through headphones but i can definately here something there. breakdown in the middle of your track is ok, maybe you could give it a rest with that synth sound for a little in the middle. Overall, keep the drum rolls up, give it a rest with that synth sound and you've got some decent ideas in there. Not really my style of track but i kinda like it. cheerz, Tuff.
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28-07-2009 14:18 |
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