 TEST - Objectives Complete |
TEST 
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Registration Date: 25-09-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Objectives Complete' and post your comments here!
ez there,this is probly the 1st dubstep tune ive ever uploaded to this site but would like to get sum views and comments on the track so,fire away!
sfe
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20-07-2009 13:36 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Basses don't work for me... They sound low passed (or have no mids) and don't add to the folw or the track. Drums and other stuff are ok though.
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20-07-2009 15:06 |
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TEST
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i havent low passed em so am assuming they dnt have much mid if any to them.lol
ive only bin making tunes for bout a yr and half and still learning a lot,cheers for ya feedbk...
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20-07-2009 15:26 |
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Puzzle
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Liking the overall vibe of this, dunno why actually 
but this works for me.
The intro is way too long imo, and the basses are too loud (theyre pushing the drums back?).
An okay tune anyways, nice minimal vibes 
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22-07-2009 20:04 |
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TEST
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cheers man,grateful for the feedbk!
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23-07-2009 21:33 |
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Gregg
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I can pretty much agree to what the others say.
For me this tune has some sort of spooky feel so maybe you want to extend it under this viewpoint. Dirty vocals and maybe a heavier soundscape…
the main parts with the overpowering basses leave quite a bit of room for other elements when turned down.
I do not like the kick drum. It has no bottom end and sounds as if taken from a rock tune. Your fat sub may make it hard to appear differently but with a bit of eq and/or sidechain compression you should achieve a better result.
Snare also needs more snap to it (layer, eq, compress) and a better placement in the mix. If it won’t break through after lowered bass volume you’ll need to eq them and cut the freq. where your snare hits slightly.
As your melodies aren’t really catchy enough you need something else in order to make your tune stand out. In your case deffo go for more atmospherics. That means more pad action or processed oneshots with delay and loads reverb.
Try native instruments absynth, it’s ideal to create sounds that might fit in here.
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