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Sensa Sensa is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Golden Child ' and post your comments here!!!

Theres a big emotional tale behind this one soooo I really don't care if nobody likes it :P My Girlfriend lost her baby so I created this track in the name of my baby....

Feedback appreciated

edit by thechronic: all tracks by djsensa are removed because of repeated use of copyrighted samples

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05-04-2004 13:36 Homepage of Sensa
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Trance intro? Sounds like that Smile

Drums are nice, maybe boost the kick a bit.
Drop: bassline is a too loud.
Like the second bassline, but thatone lacks sub.
Not that exiting overall. It's just that vocal with those string, the breaks and the bassline. Needs more imo

3/5

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05-04-2004 16:59 Homepage of Surya
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Sad news about the baby Frown Hope both of you are okay...

About the track: I've listened to it a couple of times now and it's growing a bit on me, the more I listen to it the more I like it. The basic song ideas are nice, it's a commercial tinted roller, nicely built up with good melodies and sounds. The way you change the chord every 4 bars is good, makes it sound professional. The drum variations are well done.

The sound is not good though, it's way too aggressive sounding. Check out your high mids (1kHz - 3kHz) - many of the sounds have their most important frequencies in this region and they clash. It might help to start with cutting out these frequencies in the effects.

Listening on speakers the bass is too powerful, but on headphones it's fine.

There seems to be a problem with one of your loops, like a small gap at the end of the loop which causes the first kickdrum at the start of the loop to jump out (listen from 3:07 onwards).

For the rest I really like this track, it definitely has dance floor potential, flows nicely and never gets boring.

How did you make it? Can I mix it in the studio to fix the sound? Tongue

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06-04-2004 11:11 Homepage of thechronic
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Bigup very nc Bigup

i started listening 2the track and realy loved the voc with the string (gives it that sentimental twist) Smile )

U also arranged the track very nicly keeps u listening

could use a littel tuning on the beat as alsow a littel bit of variation.alsow the voc seems to do some strange stuff now and than maybe it's ur cutting.

My love 2 ur golden child

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Arrr thanks to everyone! Respect to all....

Chronic, i used FL Studio for the entireee thing, i usually tend not to, depends what kit your using if you want it in the studio mate!

Hit me back....

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06-04-2004 22:48 Homepage of Sensa
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Chronic, i used FL Studio for the entireee thing, i usually tend not to, depends what kit your using if you want it in the studio mate!

Hehe Big Grin

I'll take some pictures from the studio and post them this evening Wink

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Lol, that's a good one Big Grin

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07-04-2004 10:05 Homepage of Surya
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damn sorry to hear that..

the track Shocked

totally my thing! the intro would make me fly Shocked wikkid... the rest of the track does make me fly! dang feeling this deeeep! bass perfect, beats lovely!

some of the soundeffects are a bit too loud and could use some reverb..

Bigup Bigup Big Grin love it! gonna check some more of your stuff!

cheerz

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Thankz again ! Safe for that Emblem.....Just started producin dnb a good few months ago really, before that it was trancey shit so im just started to get to grips with all this!. But thanks for the great feedback anyway....well chuffed!

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quote:
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Arrr thanks to everyone! Respect to all....

Chronic, i used FL Studio for the entireee thing, i usually tend not to, depends what kit your using if you want it in the studio mate!

Hit me back....

Oh yeah I promised you those pics Big Grin
Well this is how the studio looked today Tongue


the console and 4 pairs of speakers


the protools and mobile recording rack


the effects rack and some junk


What do you think??? Big Grin

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08-04-2004 22:46 Homepage of thechronic
Sensa Sensa is a male
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Mmmmm very nice....GIMME!!!

Cool

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