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Surya
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Trance intro? Sounds like that
Drums are nice, maybe boost the kick a bit.
Drop: bassline is a too loud.
Like the second bassline, but thatone lacks sub.
Not that exiting overall. It's just that vocal with those string, the breaks and the bassline. Needs more imo
3/5
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05-04-2004 16:59 |
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thechronic
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Sad news about the baby
Hope both of you are okay...
About the track: I've listened to it a couple of times now and it's growing a bit on me, the more I listen to it the more I like it. The basic song ideas are nice, it's a commercial tinted roller, nicely built up with good melodies and sounds. The way you change the chord every 4 bars is good, makes it sound professional. The drum variations are well done.
The sound is not good though, it's way too aggressive sounding. Check out your high mids (1kHz - 3kHz) - many of the sounds have their most important frequencies in this region and they clash. It might help to start with cutting out these frequencies in the effects.
Listening on speakers the bass is too powerful, but on headphones it's fine.
There seems to be a problem with one of your loops, like a small gap at the end of the loop which causes the first kickdrum at the start of the loop to jump out (listen from 3:07 onwards).
For the rest I really like this track, it definitely has dance floor potential, flows nicely and never gets boring.
How did you make it? Can I mix it in the studio to fix the sound?
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06-04-2004 11:11 |
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gripz
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06-04-2004 14:41 |
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Sensa
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Arrr thanks to everyone! Respect to all....
Chronic, i used FL Studio for the entireee thing, i usually tend not to, depends what kit your using if you want it in the studio mate!
Hit me back....
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06-04-2004 22:48 |
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thechronic
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Originally posted by djsensa2004
Chronic, i used FL Studio for the entireee thing, i usually tend not to, depends what kit your using if you want it in the studio mate!
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Hehe
I'll take some pictures from the studio and post them this evening
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07-04-2004 08:53 |
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Surya
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Lol, that's a good one
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07-04-2004 10:05 |
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damn sorry to hear that..
the track
totally my thing! the intro would make me fly
wikkid... the rest of the track does make me fly! dang feeling this deeeep! bass perfect, beats lovely!
some of the soundeffects are a bit too loud and could use some reverb..
love it! gonna check some more of your stuff!
cheerz
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07-04-2004 12:21 |
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Sensa
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Thankz again ! Safe for that Emblem.....Just started producin dnb a good few months ago really, before that it was trancey shit so im just started to get to grips with all this!. But thanks for the great feedback anyway....well chuffed!
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07-04-2004 14:08 |
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thechronic
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Originally posted by djsensa2004
Arrr thanks to everyone! Respect to all....
Chronic, i used FL Studio for the entireee thing, i usually tend not to, depends what kit your using if you want it in the studio mate!
Hit me back.... |
Oh yeah I promised you those pics
Well this is how the studio looked today

the console and 4 pairs of speakers

the protools and mobile recording rack

the effects rack and some junk
What do you think???
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08-04-2004 22:46 |
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Sensa
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Mmmmm very nice....GIMME!!!
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