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alternate force
Cool Producer

Registration Date: 23-01-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Classic' and post your comments here!
hi all
!!!!! this is my latest track made on reason 4 ... please let me know what u think ... peace !!
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18-07-2009 14:36 |
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walcor
by walcor


Registration Date: 14-02-2008
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not too keen on the synth, but the melody winds up real good imo...could be a little airier and and not that large...the synth could use a FX at 3:40 sth...as not to repeat it self
Deffo its sth new
I do think it needs some additions... melody wise, gives you a sad feeling, or maybe its the rainy weather...
The point in case is that is winds up nice and leaves you waiting for something that never happens during the track...it is clean and the structure is good but for me it lacks sth...it is like a orchestra to begin, but is cut of at some point...IMO
Hope that's any help...overall its sth new indeed, haven't heard sth like it here before
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20-07-2009 08:06 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm

Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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it's classic.
now listening to the track...
deep kick, nice light drums overall, fading in, and pads nice.
the bass is all sub, no higher harmonics to help give it a clear pitch or definition. hard to do, that's for sure, sounds nice though if i had a sub woofer.
1:40 if that's the drop you need a distorted or some sort of lead to play along in unision to the bassline. that's fucking weak. it has less elements then the intro.
i don't think that's good oldskool with no drop.
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20-07-2009 17:41 |
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Evasive Action
joeuk

Registration Date: 25-11-2008
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I dont agree with halph here at all, IMO you dont need a lead or distorted b line after the drop, sounds nice and deep with just the sub rolling out. synth gives the track character and the drums are really driving everything along. wicked track
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21-07-2009 14:23 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Compared to your other recent tunes, this one is a little bland by comparison. But it's still pretty decent. Melodies are simple and sweet. Everything seems pretty well EQed too. Can't hear much clipping or conflicts.
What this tune needs is something to bring it to life, like a lead melody or a mid-range bassline. It seems like you have the beat and background melody sorted but you forgot the lead melody.
Btw, I got your PM the other day with the zip folder of your tunes. Seriously good mate!
Big thanks for that.
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23-07-2009 22:05 |
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