oh ... battle got a tune on here .. long time man
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well .. nice old skool feel mate , would like to hear the pads with some more high end on it , just a tad .. i think the kik sounds a bit flat to me , not sure if its the snare not complimenting the whole beat well enough !!!
not sure about the really wide hats eve`r .. could be better sounding a bit tighter ..
overall nice .. def needs some work thou .. but still early days !!!
but seriously, very clean n clear production here, really like the shiny hi's in this, synths n bass all sounding good as well
i do feel as though sumthin is missing, that x factor to make is sound like a complete tune, sorry to be vague but i'm sure u can acheive this thru many ways, maybe a bigger build, additional elements possibily some more edits (or more sounds with modulations etc to fill up the variations u already have in place)
that intro is totally my buzz, love those kinda atmospheric chords in intros, and the same with the melodies at around 2:30. Tune is good, reckon some more mid range bass sounds would be nice as i could only really hear really highs an a sub which made it a bit weak. good sounds
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i liked it. really old skool, which just seems empty, but the perfect amout of other stuff to make it seem just sparse, not empty. love the ogun 4 sure.
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Originally posted by Timmi
Tune is good, reckon some more mid range bass sounds would be nice as i could only really hear really highs an a sub which made it a bit weak.
The original mp3 (160Kbps) sound a lot more crisp and clean than the VBR version on here, the sub sounds warmer and fuller in that version
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As the others mentioned, it does need a bit more filling out. I think you should create a bit more Sub movement. Maybe take some ideas from artists like Remarc or Zinc for your bass. Possibly distort the sub every now and then aswell.
I think you could do a bit more with the vocal. Maybe drop the pitch/distort and stretch as the second pad drop comes in. It would help the atmosphere a bit better.
Some nice elements in it though, like I've already told you.
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lovin the atmos in the intro mate brilliant stuff got a good vibe. if i had to pick fault with something the intro- drop could have been a little smoother
kinda changed a bit suddenly i love the high toned, glitchy sound around 2:20 though really really smooth. the pads are of high quality and levels seem good, only other thing is the track could be filled out a bit more as others have mentioned im sure though it will be sorted
id probably drop a few more variations in there too, all in all though quality track
Nice tune in overall, but it needs some fill(espetialy on the bass, but hey, that`s my taste
Otherwise, I can`t find anything that isn`t ok in this track:-)
As usual dude, ur pushing things forward, smart track. Wud love to hear the sub bass bit louder, maybe kik down a lil (or low cut below 40 Hz). 4 Hours Very Well Spent Squire!
good work mate!
