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illuminati
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Registration Date: 21-01-2004
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It`s been a while since i`ve completed a whole track...i`ve been busy...check this out....

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03-04-2004 11:54
Airfull Airfull is a female
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what a strange beginning ! Tongue

haha, with the frog I c a frog running away from the wwwghaaaaaawwghhhh noice!!! Tongue

it's like alice in wonderland!

it's a bit eeuh confusing!
maybe this song needs a bit more 'structuur'
for me there are to much sounds!

the drums are quite ok!! Pleased

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03-04-2004 14:45
Surya Surya is a male
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Missing a lot of hi-end on thisone

Main theme isn't bad. A bit simple, but shoud be good enough to work.
Bassline is good, deep and loud enough
Hoovers should be louder with more hi-end (not the main ones, the one in the background)
Vocal is way too loud
Amen is quite good, but needs more hi-end and should be louder.
Whole track is a bit too repetetive due to to the simple theme and not enough variations in your themes.
2.5/5

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05-04-2004 16:51 Homepage of Surya
Sensa Sensa is a male
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lol i really like that little sound effect at the begginin its cool. Production work sounds nice and clean so far just coming up to the drop.....the snare before it is cool. The main drop itself is fine but lacking with a real lead or theme probably better without that choppy synth them mayb bring it in on the next verse? give it a harder sound and more variation.

but hey its your style all i can do is critisise!
nice production work overall.
big ups

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