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alternate force alternate force is a male
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Please check out my new track 'I Want U (original Mix)' and post your comments here!

hi ... i posted a remix of this about a month ago , this is the original mix ... would like to know what u think ... made on reason 4 !!!

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09-07-2009 18:02
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Nice tune, I think the build up could have been better though, to make more of an impact when the bassline comes in. apart from that, really melodic an beat rolls along well.

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09-07-2009 18:09 Homepage of Timmi
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Sounds fantastic, but the kick drum should be louder and the drums could do with some more ghost action, they sound a tad too robotic now.
One hihat is clearly placed out of center, would be better to have it in good stereo or mono, not panned. Mixdown/mastering could make it extra shiny.
Good melodies, good vibe, everything fits, nice vocals...
Sweet sweet liquid... Are you TOMOS?

LOL

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09-07-2009 22:16 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
Are you TOMOS?

LOL


I fucking wish! Big Grin

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09-07-2009 22:30 Homepage of Tomos
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he he ... thanks battle Smile !!!!!!

nice to hear u like it .. and ill take the TOMOS thing as a really good compliment Smile .. 4 some reason im struggling to get my dnb beats right Frown , i tried a few new different ways to do them ... i try to put some extra ghosts n shit in them !!!

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10-07-2009 13:04
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likeing this one ...chilled vibe here

High quality mastering and good use of samples

nothing else to add...great work

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10-07-2009 14:25 Homepage of walcor
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4 some reason im struggling to get my dnb beats right Frown , i tried a few new different ways to do them ... i try to put some extra ghosts n shit in them !!!


Layer a well structured break underneath and make sure you allign the kicks, snares and ghosts. The "Cold Sweat" break is my favourite for that, instant rollyness. Please don't use the amen break as it has been used soooo often that it has become really hard to sound anything near original with it.

You could even copy the structure of a well structured break by putting kicks, snares, hihats, ghost hits,... on the same positions and then leave the the break out and just keep the stuff you layered on top.

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10-07-2009 14:41 Homepage of BattleDrone
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nice one! like that laidback style. don't know how many 'third-party' samples you used e.g. the vocals? ... personally like it if the sounds are made yourself but i use samples, too.
very well mixed after all, nothing standing out unpleasingly... like the outro too
10-07-2009 19:22
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You bastard, I was going to write this tune! Tongue

Seriously tho, this is fucking sweet mate. Soo, so catchy. Lots of commerical appeal but without being cheesy (good combination). You've got me jealous over those vocals. They work perfectly with the other melodies. If you were using FL (or I was using Reason) I would love to collab with you. This tune definitely reminds me of my own style, but better. Those melodies are superb, yet so simple.

The only thing which needs tweaking, imo, is the amount of grittiness on the beats. They seem to be breaking up a little too much. Also, there's a touch too much stereo panning on the hi hats I reckon.

But I'm nit-picking. This is brilliant. Bigup Listen

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10-07-2009 20:21 Homepage of Tomos
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the drums in the intro take too long to start otherwise vibe is spot on
drums should imo variate more later on I feel theres not much in terms of developing the theme you set. what youve got going is sweet and that probalby is the style, simply not much progression apart the vocals. Id chuck in some more bass(es)

its an alright tune no doubt. keep up

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10-07-2009 21:21 Homepage of cynik
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Man, this is nice.

I think the bass drum is a bit long. Nothing major, just could decay a bit quicker and leave more room

Very dreamy feel, feels like the sun will come out soon. I've just checked and it's still lashing down Mad

I think you should add a few ghost drums to help it roll around the second part (2.30ish)

Very nice mate. Enjoyed Happy

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13-07-2009 03:22
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Really pro, very clean sound
it's as dreamy as it is energetic
liquid is not really my thing but i can
appreciate this, good tune!
13-07-2009 16:30
jared bryant jared bryant is a male
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good stuff, reminds of blade runner.
14-07-2009 22:07 Homepage of jared bryant
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Interesting beginning, tho a bit repetitive.
I love the sounds.

Cool tune, love the techstep/liquid mixture. The vocal is a bit repetitive, reminds me of some house tunes, but works in this combo. Keep it on.

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20-07-2009 23:39 Homepage of Muad'Dib
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like it mate, very smooth, great liquid vibe. vocals are sweet. great track overall
21-07-2009 13:53
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