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alternate force 
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Please check out my new track 'I Want U (original Mix)' and post your comments here!
hi ... i posted a remix of this about a month ago , this is the original mix ... would like to know what u think ... made on reason 4 !!!
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09-07-2009 18:02 |
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Timmi
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Nice tune, I think the build up could have been better though, to make more of an impact when the bassline comes in. apart from that, really melodic an beat rolls along well.
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09-07-2009 18:09 |
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BattleDrone
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Sounds fantastic, but the kick drum should be louder and the drums could do with some more ghost action, they sound a tad too robotic now.
One hihat is clearly placed out of center, would be better to have it in good stereo or mono, not panned. Mixdown/mastering could make it extra shiny.
Good melodies, good vibe, everything fits, nice vocals...
Sweet sweet liquid... Are you TOMOS?
LOL
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09-07-2009 22:16 |
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Tomos
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
Are you TOMOS?
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I fucking wish! 
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09-07-2009 22:30 |
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alternate force
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he he ... thanks battle
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nice to hear u like it .. and ill take the TOMOS thing as a really good compliment
.. 4 some reason im struggling to get my dnb beats right 
, i tried a few new different ways to do them ... i try to put some extra ghosts n shit in them !!!
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10-07-2009 13:04 |
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walcor
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10-07-2009 14:25 |
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BattleDrone
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Originally posted by alternate force
4 some reason im struggling to get my dnb beats right
, i tried a few new different ways to do them ... i try to put some extra ghosts n shit in them !!! |
Layer a well structured break underneath and make sure you allign the kicks, snares and ghosts. The "Cold Sweat" break is my favourite for that, instant rollyness. Please don't use the amen break as it has been used soooo often that it has become really hard to sound anything near original with it.
You could even copy the structure of a well structured break by putting kicks, snares, hihats, ghost hits,... on the same positions and then leave the the break out and just keep the stuff you layered on top.
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10-07-2009 14:41 |
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kaisersals
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nice one! like that laidback style. don't know how many 'third-party' samples you used e.g. the vocals? ... personally like it if the sounds are made yourself but i use samples, too.
very well mixed after all, nothing standing out unpleasingly... like the outro too
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10-07-2009 19:22 |
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Tomos
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You bastard, I was going to write this tune! 
Seriously tho, this is fucking sweet mate. Soo, so catchy. Lots of commerical appeal but without being cheesy (good combination). You've got me jealous over those vocals. They work perfectly with the other melodies. If you were using FL (or I was using Reason) I would love to collab with you. This tune definitely reminds me of my own style, but better. Those melodies are superb, yet so simple.
The only thing which needs tweaking, imo, is the amount of grittiness on the beats. They seem to be breaking up a little too much. Also, there's a touch too much stereo panning on the hi hats I reckon.
But I'm nit-picking. This is brilliant. 
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10-07-2009 20:21 |
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cynik
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the drums in the intro take too long to start otherwise vibe is spot on
drums should imo variate more later on I feel theres not much in terms of developing the theme you set. what youve got going is sweet and that probalby is the style, simply not much progression apart the vocals. Id chuck in some more bass(es)
its an alright tune no doubt. keep up
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10-07-2009 21:21 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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13-07-2009 03:22 |
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Patlabor
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Really pro, very clean sound
it's as dreamy as it is energetic
liquid is not really my thing but i can
appreciate this, good tune!
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13-07-2009 16:30 |
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jared bryant
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good stuff, reminds of blade runner.
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14-07-2009 22:07 |
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Muad'Dib
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Interesting beginning, tho a bit repetitive.
I love the sounds.
Cool tune, love the techstep/liquid mixture. The vocal is a bit repetitive, reminds me of some house tunes, but works in this combo. Keep it on.
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20-07-2009 23:39 |
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Evasive Action
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like it mate, very smooth, great liquid vibe. vocals are sweet. great track overall
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21-07-2009 13:53 |
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