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philbee
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Please check out my new track 'Juxta Position' and post your comments here!
hello there!?!
Track ive been working on for a couple of nights now,Really pleased with what ive got so far,
Any feedback is appreciated good or bad,
rate or slate!!lol!
Made on the usual
Mastering should be a lot better on this one but im sure you guys will tell me if its not.
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08-07-2009 23:02 |
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BattleDrone
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Again the main drop has massive clipping going on at some bass hits. The hihats and ghost hits get pushed away from it.
But The tune itself is pretty sick, you seem to have put a lot of work into the structure this time and their is a good buildup going on.
You finally seem to have taken my advice on needed variation. The track could still do with some extra elements, but I see a lot of progress in the right direction.
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08-07-2009 23:52 |
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walcor
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I dont know..hmmm
when the basses meet they really go overboard, and distort the drums a lot...imo the prr bass and the sub are too heavy when they meat deffo...and could use some atmosphere some light strings or sth...the drums are nice and the effects are great, but the bass imo is too messy...they could use some change as well...but as you said you worked on it for a couple of nights so...not bad
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09-07-2009 08:14 |
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brucifer
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Sounds a bit loud again, like the track up yesterday.
I think you need another break to compliment the intro one.
Drop is ok, but needs more work, its a bit empty.
definately needs some percussion with your drums, they sound a bit tired and are getting a bit boring.
3.45. Nice pad, you incorperate it a bit earlier really, there isn't really enough going on before then.
Right then, track ain't bad, but it is very empty and need a lot more going on. It sounds more like a loop really. You could have a good track out of this though. At the moment, it doesn't really stand out for me.
Hope that didn't sound to bad.
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09-07-2009 09:33 |
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Timmi
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wicked track i love these neuro rollers. big tune. Have u used a sample from Break-Traits remix? nice mix down too really clear.
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09-07-2009 18:35 |
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philbee
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ez thanks for all the comments,
see this is what confuses me ive got some peeps saying its clipping
and then timmi saying it sounds like a good mixdown!?!
ive listend to it in a few places and played it up against tunes that i like
(mixdown wise) and it sounds fine!
and @ timmi no not sampled from that tune but one bass stab is sampled from a tune from the man in question.
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09-07-2009 22:46 |
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cynik
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the bass is deffinitely drowning the beats at times but thats cos the beats are too loud to start with. you could have at least compress each of those before boosting. or maybe you did ?
cool vibe and the switches are alright
otherwise the tune is wicked
work on that sound!
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10-07-2009 21:34 |
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Tomos
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Yep, I would definitely agree that it's clipping unfortunately. The deep sub bass on top of the gritty bass stabs are really causing the beats to flatten. The first instances of this occurs at 1.29 and 1.32. You can hear the other elements dip in volume.
Other than that, it's a good solid tune, although it tends to get a bit repetitive around the 3.00 mark. At that point, I wanted something else to happen to spice it up a bit.
Good stuff.
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10-07-2009 21:34 |
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Timmi
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i dunno y i cant hear it clipping, i feel like an idiot, lol, but i cant. surely ud know if it was clipping aswell?? ive heard ur tunes be4 an id like to think u kno what ur doing lol
anyway i still like it. if its things dipping in volume etc, is that a problem with compression on the overall mix? still liking this alot anyway hehe
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10-07-2009 21:48 |
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cynik
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10-07-2009 22:07 |
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Puzzle
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Yeah the actual sounds are great, breaks are rolling nicely and the basses are dirty enough
Just fix the ducking and this'll be biiig
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13-07-2009 15:33 |
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MuzzyDNB
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Alrite bruv very nice track here.
Liking the old schoolish vibes going on here, good shizz man!
hmm, the intro could be more varied i guess, just to keep the listener listening i guess =D
i think the sub is tangling up with your kick and mid-range bass.
try and low cut your mid range bass, and boost up your kick to about 90-100hz if you havn't already.
that should just about make your sub snug in nicely.
good stuff here man!
keep this up mate!
- Muzzy
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13-07-2009 16:13 |
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Patlabor

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Like it! gritty , bit minimalistic but i like that!
i personaly have the feeling like more needs to happen, some changes to make it more intresting , maybe add more elements.
nice one man, good track imo! gritttyyya
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13-07-2009 16:36 |
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