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cynik cynik is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Discarded Evidence' and post your comments here!

an old breaks tune I just finished. most vocals by me Big Grin

comments welcome

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08-07-2009 01:02 Homepage of cynik
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Man, you have some heavy sound there. Happy

Think you need to bring your vocals forward, they're lost behind you effects at the moment.

It's not really my style, but it's is pretty good technically. Sound is very in your face. nice one brov. =

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08-07-2009 07:35
cynik cynik is a male
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cheers bruce

theres another version with female vocals which was way too cheesy for submission

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08-07-2009 07:47 Homepage of cynik
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the vocals are to quiet imo

everything else is nice...

interesting track...enjoyed it

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08-07-2009 07:47 Homepage of walcor
cynik cynik is a male
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vocals have a lot of fx on them which sound bad when turned louder..

cheers for the ears walcor

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08-07-2009 13:50 Homepage of cynik
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nice punchy drums...a bit messy structure for my taste. Vocals do sound a bit silent. Maybe you could throw some new bass or synth there from time to time, the synth line gets worn too quickly. all in all nice track, good to hear some breakbeat stuff here

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08-07-2009 21:17 Homepage of wrm
cynik cynik is a male
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check www.myspace.com/biasrbija for moar breaks.

cheers for checkin it

anyone else?

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09-07-2009 09:20 Homepage of cynik
Patlabor Patlabor is a female
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Coolest track i heard all day here
has a fucking additude too,
really really nice, clean mix
more please

*thanks for the review btw Pleased
13-07-2009 16:56
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Fuck, I thought I had already reviewed this one. Obviously not. Here goes...

That vocal sample is very funky. Sounds like the start to an old breabeats tune or something. Love the rhythm to it.

The intro part until 1.40 is interesting but a bit slow for me. I'm pretty sure you could have reduced that section by 20 seconds and got to the main beats a bit quicker.

Production quality is very good. Probably lacks a bit of bass I reckon. There is no real depth to the mix. The highs and mids are very clear and defined tho. Well done.

One other slight gripe is that there are too many FX. They are quite loud and all the reverb tends to drown the other elements at points.

Other than that, this is a wicked tune BECAUSE Wink it's got a solid, funky rhythm that doesn't get stale and works great with the bass melodies. Nice one, I like it.

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13-07-2009 20:27 Homepage of Tomos
Puzzle Puzzle is a male
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Liking the dark atmospheres throughout Wink

The vocals are a bit quiet indeed but I dont know if its a bad thing or a good thing..

Great tune in my opinion Drummer

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13-07-2009 22:53 Homepage of Puzzle
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Wagwan bro, this is a tasty breaks beat man. Mean basses and great structuring imo.
Good shit!
Intro/Build could be better.
i dunno about the melodies in the intro, maybe thats just taste.
mastering sounds fine to me, don't have any stereo issues really.
sounds sweet.
good job mate!!
- Muzzy
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14-07-2009 20:51
cynik cynik is a male
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Originally posted by MuzzyDNB
Wagwan bro, this is a tasty breaks beat man. Mean basses and great structuring imo.
Good shit!
Intro/Build could be better.
i dunno about the melodies in the intro, maybe thats just taste.
mastering sounds fine to me, don't have any stereo issues really.
sounds sweet.
good job mate!!
- Muzzy
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tell me what do you think is wrong with the melody in the intro?

ta for the review

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14-07-2009 21:40 Homepage of cynik
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AWESOME!!!

i like the dark bassy melody.
but id add a little "evolving distortion" so it turns from what you got (which is great!) into something more DIRTY.

GREAT TRACK!!!
01-09-2009 02:39
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