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carmod carmod is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Time' and post your comments here!


not a full truck at all,just an idea. havent made music in ages so bear with me, still a beginner

song has gone wierd since i put it up! lead has gone messed up?


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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by carmod: 06-07-2009 13:53.
06-07-2009 13:49
walcor walcor is a male
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hmmmm....?

the snare...tooo much out there...and to rocknroll

the led melody...dosnt fit imo, its too loud and messed up...this needs some work and EQ...

sorry mate, ut thems the ropes...keep at it

what program are u using?

Cheers



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06-07-2009 14:16 Homepage of walcor
wrm
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hehe, this one is funny, in a good way! I would turn up the tempo a bit at first. This is obviously all about your taste man, but I will definitely turn down the reverb on the snare. It takes away the sharpness and clearness. Kick sounds good, but its overpwered with the guitar synth when it kicks in. The synth a bit too loud also the melodies are a bit depressing hehe. A bit too stereo imo. Everything in this track seems too stereo. cheers

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06-07-2009 18:44 Homepage of wrm
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Try using a little less reverb on your snare!
06-07-2009 19:05
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Snare is too long and has too much reverb.
Whole tune sounds like distortion and reverb.

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06-07-2009 20:40 Homepage of BattleDrone
brucifer brucifer is a male
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yep, that snare has far to much reverb.

It is certainly different. Sounds like some sort of indie tune when it starts.

Tell the truth, not really diggin the melodies, they hurt my head. Sorry bro.

Hope that wasn't to harsh

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08-07-2009 07:40
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hi there, arrangement sounds like its where it should be, although the synths in particular lack tighness and cohesion, somethin with a bit more low end and centred would work better imo

kick n snare are clearly audible but the snare has got quite a large resonant tail sound to it, maybe shorten it up a bit and give it a more low end punch

i'd say this one has potential just needs some more work on the mix and ur on ur way Bigup

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08-07-2009 18:48 Homepage of Ketz
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