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Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Done To Me' and post your comments here!

This is from 3 years ago this track, from a bunch of tunes I did inspired by D-Trash's digital hardcore music.

wondering what you think?

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28-06-2009 20:38 Homepage of Halph-Price
cynik cynik is a male
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pretty cool but the distorted lead needs to be cleaner when you play it long

didnt notice it dropped it already got overcrowded with melodies where they completely devour everything else

the parts without all the synths at once actually sound good tune material

cool idea no doubt but the sounds needs an overhaul

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28-06-2009 21:56 Homepage of cynik
Ketz Ketz is a male
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tune overall has a bit too much distortion for my liking gives it an overly messy feel, kick is a bit boomy, some good ideas in here but the production is not so great, understandable if this is 3 years old tho

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30-06-2009 13:53 Homepage of Ketz
ObsidianDnB ObsidianDnB is a male
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Whats good mang. This tune has some good rythm to it in the beginning. The distorted guitar sounding synth is sick but way to overpowering. The kick stands out quite nicely but I'm hardly hearing the snare. Around 1:15 you introduce a second sound that has a good melody but ontop of everything it gets to be a bit too much. All in all I love the concept and I think with some tender loving care and a LOT of EQ'ing it could be a banger. Big Upzeez....
01-07-2009 04:34 Homepage of ObsidianDnB
Nick ZZ Nick ZZ is a male
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Solid drumz, like the Guitar Synth. Hard to believe this is from 3 yrs ago. Cheers.

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01-07-2009 08:37 Homepage of Nick ZZ
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Can't really say anything that hasn't already been said. Yep, the distorted guitar is much too overpowering but the melodies are definitely great. Which tune is it sampled from? If only this wasn't so swamped in distortion it'd be a lot, lot better.

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01-07-2009 19:22 Homepage of Tomos
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pretty much everything has been sayd ...

it not bad but could use remastering

guess u allready know anyway

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02-07-2009 13:14 Homepage of walcor
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Hello mate! Big Grin
im a new producer here on drumnbass.be.
glad to see some original stuff here! Smile
just a liill bit of issues you can definatley improve on.
it doesnt sound like it 'drops' enough.
i think you really need some sub subbing around here and there, and try to develope the right frequencies between your drums and introduction.
i like that nice rock bass there, but again, needs to be backed up with mr. sub! (bleh, that rhymes.)
i like the reesing going on in the background i hear Wink
could do with a bit more movement though. and those drums need a bit of a smack up the arse.
try and boost up your snare to 200hz and your kick to a
bout 70-100 hz. thats usually the freqs i use Big Grin

and erm, can't really think of much to say to be fair.
just keep doing what your doing, and maybe one day you could be huge! Big Grin
btw, message to the admin, sorry for spamming on the other reviews, couldn't think of anything to say! lol
i just really wunna get my stuff uploaded and get some feedback (:
won't happen again, sir.
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anyway greetz from muzzy!
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12-07-2009 23:17
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