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Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
Rogue Ai


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Please check out my new track 'The Resistance' and post your comments here!

I created this track using Reason 4 and Cubase LE 4. I think it is pretty much finished but is there anything that sounds off?

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27-06-2009 01:22 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
cynik cynik is a male
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you always seem to start with half beats. IMO try doing a real hiphop beat for the instead of slowing down the main beats.

drops: bass is wicked but the drums are a bit ont he tinny side so the drop looses impact. more compression and eqing. Id sidechain the kick and snare to the bass as tight as possible. again I feel a lower pitched snare would work better

the vocal bits later on are a bit too loud

bass is good, could be with more bass vs less mids

work it

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28-06-2009 10:23 Homepage of cynik
walcor walcor is a male
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yeh what cynik sayd about the drums...

vocals are bit too plain imo...could use more effects.

rest is dark side as usual

a touch here and there and this could be really good.

The string could be more sinister imo

hope this has been helpful

cheers

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29-06-2009 07:51 Homepage of walcor
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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I'm not a big fan of halfstep.
Intro has good tension, but it doens't take off bad enough. 1:30 is really late to start a buildup to the main drop. Main drop isn't bad but the kick needs more punch. The ghosthits in your break sound too silent and muffled, they need more mids.
Main part gets repetitive pretty soon. Second drop is better than the first one, but 5:49 is too long. Tune needs more variation, drums that roll more and have a better kick drum.
vocals are nice.

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04-07-2009 14:44 Homepage of BattleDrone
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