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Greyone 
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Please check out my new track '3 Days Ago I Died' and post your comments here!
hiphop hardstep
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26-06-2009 16:27 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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The stereo on the mixdown makes everything sound sharp, too sharp. The bass is almost non existent.
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27-06-2009 10:50 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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I was expecting a Michael Jackson song with that title, sort of seems fit with the timing 
Man, this is a nice track brov. Really enjoying this.
It is certainly original, no complaints at all
More of this please
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28-06-2009 12:27 |
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leprecon
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ahaha! you're crazy! the beat's really destructive but the pipe is amazin! Nice work mate!
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28-06-2009 14:17 |
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Greyone
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cool
yeah its better now that i re-aranged my setup in my room , everything sounds more natural now (before i was sitting cornered)
maybe a bit much stereo usage but thats nothing to bitch about , its the progress in cleaness of the sound that counts 
thanks for checking and dont forget to book me once in a while 
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28-06-2009 16:53 |
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Ketz
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30-06-2009 13:34 |
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ObsidianDnB
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This track has a super nice step to it. My girl just got out of her seat to jump around on the floor. Trust me thats a good thing. Mixdown sounds good. Nice progression and change up. No complaints here. Good Tune!
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01-07-2009 04:48 |
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Tomos
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Definitely better than your previous effort, imo. This one is more interesting and original. It's got groove. However, I felt it dragged its heals towards the end. It's like you ran out of ideas a little and some of the energy was lost. Also, like Battle mentioned, the amount of stereo panning you've used makes the overall mix sound too sharp and polarised. I know you don't like using headphones but perhaps you should just check your mixes at the end to make sure the panning is ok. I never use monitors (no money, no suitable spare room), but I suspect that you'll be missing a lot of the subtle details by avoiding headphones.
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02-07-2009 20:03 |
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cynik
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02-07-2009 20:16 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by Tomos
Definitely better than your previous effort, imo. This one is more interesting and original. It's got groove. However, I felt it dragged its heals towards the end. It's like you ran out of ideas a little and some of the energy was lost. Also, like Battle mentioned, the amount of stereo panning you've used makes the overall mix sound too sharp and polarised. I know you don't like using headphones but perhaps you should just check your mixes at the end to make sure the panning is ok. I never use monitors (no money, no suitable spare room), but I suspect that you'll be missing a lot of the subtle details by avoiding headphones. |
hehehe , yes i lost the idea in the 2nd drop as u can hear
didnt spend much time on this one tho , just focused on the clean sound , too mush stereo indeed (full stereo high end , allmost full stereo mid/high)
and about the headphone issue , well infact i need to buy myself a fat transition jack , then i can connect my heady to my soundcard
then i might use my heads a bit more
thanks for the reactions boys n girls
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02-07-2009 20:37 |
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Mov3mnt
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yeees!!! that break is phat. great tune. sorry just gotta rewind that first drop....
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05-07-2009 16:28 |
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MuzzyDNB
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Hey, im a NOOB to this site =D
yeh. im muzzy. nice to see some breakcore producers here.
and i gotta say, nice jizz here!!
nothing seriously bad to say here.
intro seems to be working fine. You've captured me into it, created quite a bit of suspense and anitcipation for a big drop, and it is.
i love this kinda music. need to practise on it more myself, hehe.
i guess the mastering is fine tbh, no issues at all.
i have to write 100 f!cking words and usually i would spend it by trying to give some constructive critisizm but this track is seriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriouslyseriously seriously seriously
good and i can see it going quite far.
nothing bad to say.
5*
- Muzzy
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12-07-2009 23:00 |
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