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Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Detonate( V. 2)' and post your comments here!


I worked on the track some more. Is this version better?

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Travis_Huckins: 21-06-2009 06:39.

21-06-2009 06:07 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
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first thing I notice is the toned down strings, dunno I liked the previous ones better

drops: melody is much better heard now, but the drums arent there yet, maybe it was your preference but Id much prefer stronger beats

still dont like the pitched up leads later on

it is better, maybe waht youve gone for, but IMO harder drums would make this

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21-06-2009 13:34 Homepage of cynik
Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
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I just noticed that the some of the high end was lost. It sounded different when a mastered it but now it sounds worse. I'll guess I will have to remaster it.

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24-06-2009 07:37 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
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Snare doesn't smash, it sounds like a metal plate being hit.
Overall mix isn't too bad.
Ghosts bits are too thin and silent.
Doesn't grab me by the balls, it sounds like rock rather than DNB with those guitar like sound and non-funk melodies.

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24-06-2009 21:04 Homepage of BattleDrone
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guitar are pretty original, dont hear those so much in dnb, think the drums are a bit weak, the snare hasnt got enough high end snap to really cut through and the kick is a bit flabby...sounds like you've compressed em too much, could use more elements too to make it more interesting, the bassline is pretty good...nice modulation to keep it moving, think the drums really need some work tho..

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26-06-2009 20:21 Homepage of Sephiroth
Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
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I wasn't really a guitar sound it was some sort of reece type thing with a lot of reverb.

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27-06-2009 00:50 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
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