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20-06-2009 00:22 |
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Zugzwang
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Ez mate,
I like those synths a lot, they sound really fresh. They're really moody too, they have kind of a sci-fi feeling to them. I'm definitely digging the vibe on this one. The drums sound crisp and I especially like the shuffle, I think the snare could be a little more pronounced in the mix but that's about it.
The structure at times is a little hard to follow, but other than that I'd say you've got a great track mate! When's the dubplate coming out? 
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20-06-2009 07:53 |
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cynik
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20-06-2009 13:59 |
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Tomos
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Didn't really get into this one until the drop at 1.05. The intro feels a bit disjointed and directionless to me. Sounds like you haven't give it much thought yet? Needs a bit more development to build-up the tension before the drop.
Once it drops tho, the energy definitely picks up. The beat is very solid. More rock than drum 'n' bass I reckon (no bad thing). I could imagine armies under dictatorships marching to this.
Melodies are really good. Gets a bit messy in the middle tho. Kinda loses all its groove with those stop-start glitchy rhythms. I'm not such a fan of those because it sounds like there's a software error or something. Doesn't feel natural.
Like I said, basslines are great. Again tho, your bass sounds are quite muddy. They definitely need more definition, more mid-range distortion. If you get them sounding more chunky - perhaps slightly like distorted metal guitars - that would be heading in the right direction, imo.
Good stuff so far.
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20-06-2009 15:02 |
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cynik
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cheers mate, yeah this was pretty experimental as I wanted to create a 2 step tune that actually doesnt get boring. the way its done though, wasnt following a standard "make one pattern right then copy paste it" methods, but watching the 1/3s, more kind of a like jazz is done approach, not that it resembles jazz in any kind lol
the beats are done 90% out of the the think break lol. theres one backing beat (the one int he intro) but its just following the think. its actually the first time I used the think break
thanks for the feedback
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20-06-2009 15:10 |
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Seven Gun
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beats are my fave on this tune.
i like the variation on them.
would love to hear a more "grungy" bass with them.
the shuffle caught me off guard at first but generally seems to work in the end. maybe add a bit of tension to some of the drops/switches
the synths popping in and out to say hi are sweet too.
just think a harder bass with like distortion n shit would be much better
nice stuff tho.
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20-06-2009 18:05 |
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demure
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nice bass stabs 
the intro sounds a little unfocused but when it drops that changes the drum patterns are a nice touch and as mentioned before the shuffles sound original stays interestin through constant changes i think that sometimes its hard to stay on track with it it seems a bit jumpy. but apart from that the sounds used are ace man really good 
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21-06-2009 16:16 |
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cng361
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Shuffle my truffle... the shuffles are awesome lil chaotic and disjointed at some points but over all i dig it the synths are smooth and i like the sci fi stabs loll wish i could write more but i tend to review everything with a "readers digest" type of writing. you know short and simple to the point. oh yeah, a nice intro would be nice to give it more build up.. i just thought of this today as i tend to be wishy washy on completing tracks i have come to the idea that i should compose my tracks like a good book.
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23-06-2009 16:23 |
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cynik
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