Production sounds really crisp and I love the liquid vibe. Could use a little more variation, maybe replace the vocal with a synth for so many bars and then go back to the vocal, enhances the structure of the tune a lot! And just a tiny bit of melodic variation, I do like the melody but it should be changed every now and then imho, like a hook to bring people's attention back to the song.
Really digging this though, very nice mixdown! Looking forward to hearing more from you!
Perhaps the only thing I would change would be to try to reduce some of the grittiness in the mix. Seems to be quite a bit of distortion on all the sounds. Personally, I feel it would sound smoother if you reduced it a touch.
Great snare sound btw.
Like Zugzwang said, a little hook would be good. Perhaps a bit of sax or acoustic guitar with some delay? Maybe a soft flute or piano?
Lovely stuff mate.
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